It is primarily in cities that a nation s cultural traditions are generated and preserved Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing

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It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The prompt urges that the cultural tradition of a nation is preserved and generated in cities of that nation. For some obvious reasons I would like to be "mostly disagree" with the given concept and therefore obliged to provide necessary viewpoints in defense of my position.

The preservation of the cultural heritage and tradition of a nation simply means to maintain that custom. Maintaining a cultural tradition and heritage occupies that the tradition is not dead yet. In this circumstances - the cities of a nation will hardly have the priviledge to continue the tradition. Normally, the cities of a nation are the ones which have been developed over the years and got priority in regards of modernization compared to the villages and subburbs. As a result, people from different parts of the nation and also from its neighbouring countries accumulate in those cities in search of their furtune. Because of mixture of various types of people - coming from different culture, the purity of a certain culture or a tradition is hampered. Consequently, the feature which is so pure of particular nation becomes obsolated. Even because of the modernization in the cities, people from different parts and cities mix with one another and influence each other habit, tradition and as a result there is good chance of interchange of culture and tradition among the intercity people. It causes even the very own proprietories of a city to dissolve and ultimately influenced by multiculture.

Another prospect of this feature in the city is the trade-off between modernization and cultural customes. As more and more families are coming into cities of a nation for better earning and leading a better live, people are choosing the ways which are more convinient to them. They are leaving the customs that are practiced by their ancestors for years and choosing the modern livelihood as they do not have enough scope but meet the requirements of the modernized society. For example - people who are living more in suburbs and villages are more tend to believe in various cultures and rituals that the modernized people of cities might not believe. Although, the rituals and cultures are the very own of both of those people still one part ignores those fully because of going with the flow of the civilized city people. Arguebly, the number of these civilized people are greater in cities and less in villages or other subburbs. Because of the imbalance in the number of customary and modernized city goers the cultural discrepency is also evident in the cities and obviously the lack of heritage is also absent. As a result, the cities are getting more devoid of the cultural customes once praticed largely among the people.

However, even though the cultural tradition is practiced less among the city dwellers, it still can preserve it in many ways. For example - as the city is more economically affluent than the villages and also have greater capacity - that is why authoritative steps can be taken to improve the customes and not leeting these to be outmoded. For example - the respective authority of the city can make some markets based on the cultural trades and cosmetics to exhibit those among the city people. They can also make some restaurants and other recreational places where the guests are served in their very own traditional manner. Also, they can make certain palces in the cities where they can cherish the city people and also the foreigner by introducing them with many cultural heritage that once practiced in the countries. Exhibition of their heritages and ancestory pride in the cities will also help them to get monetary value which can be further invested to derive many more obsolated culture. In this respect - city holds enough ability to maintain the cultural flow of its nation by incorporating various constructions and good investments which may not be feasible in other parts of the nation.

So, looking at all the points and views mentioned in the essay, it can be said that - although cities are obsolating the cultural norms and traditions of its nation, still it does posses the ability to relieve those traditions, only if proper investments and steps are taken to maintain this successfully by the authority.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... that the tradition is not dead yet. In this circumstances - the cities of a nation ...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...veloped over the years and got priority in regards of modernization compared to the villages ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 58.6224719101 169% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3559.0 2235.4752809 159% => OK
No of words: 704.0 442.535393258 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05539772727 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1510191538 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76479526162 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409090909091 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1155.6 704.065955056 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3987510322 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.814814815 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0740740741 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207062808346 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073000497524 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447481038535 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135259168218 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467619303537 0.0667264976115 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 100.480337079 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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