It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Man is by nature a social being with an innate desire to relate with other people especially those that they share the same ethics and value due to this fact it is common for individuals to associate with one social group or the other. However, I mostly disagree with the prompt that people define themselves mainly by the societal group that they belong to and will give more clarifications on my point of view in the next three paragraphs of this essay.
Firstly, people like to be seen as sociable and some others believe that by identifying with a certain group of people, they will be well accepted and protected in the society. For instance, a group such as COREN which is an acronym for Certified Organization of Engineers in Nigeria is comprised of different engineers that have met a criteria and define their capabilities with that criteria. Also, some cult members believe that by being a member of a cult they are beyond harm and each individual see themselves as some sort of mini deity . They will in one way or the other describe their personalities by identifying with these groups.
However, identifying with a group those not mean that is mainly the way most other people will define themselves because defining oneself cuts across a lot of values and the purpose of joining a social set is different from one person to another. For example, people are born into communities in which they have absolute no control on but growing up they realize that they do not agree with the values and way of life of the people in their environment because of this they might choose to migrate to other areas or continue to live there but abide by their own rules hence even though they identify with the community they do not define themselves primarily by it.
Furthermore, in today’s world it would be quite impossible not to identify with any social class, especially due to the fact that resources are scarce and many will need to leverage on technological breakthroughs like cloud computing to achieve cost effective business goals. This is exemplified by having to join an online portal that gives free access to relevant resources for some period of time, in as much as people are members of this group and might even have to communicate with themselves as the situation demands they will not mainly define themselves by belonging to that group.
Finally, defining oneself includes various attributes such as goals, aspirations, desires and religious propensity amongst others. Identifying with a social class might just be temporary action or to just fulfill an obligation and cannot be the primary way in which an individual defines his/her self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ee themselves as some sort of mini deity . They will in one way or the other descr...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e access to relevant resources for some period of time, in as much as people are members of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89427312775 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64530306501 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488986784141 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2362336264 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.166666667 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8333333333 23.4991977007 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185389907396 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810156499702 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479457417397 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122772869606 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230522767705 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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