It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing an

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It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Some people believe that it is the cause and effect relationship that compels us to form social groups, and it is the very social groups which truely reveals how those people are only upon studying those groups. Human beings, by nature, are emotional and social, requiring the assistance of others' company to continue with their livelihood. We buildup soil relationship with likeminded people or with those whom we deem worthy of our acquiantance; such relationship are driven by myriad of factors -- avaricity, trust being few of those drivers of our social relationships. Governed by such drivers, we form social groups, and when we identify people within these groups based on the same factors, we can define ourselves.

A sagacious persion once said, " If we want to know the people around us, you have to know ourselves". It's true that social groups are the result of our own needs and wants which leads us to groups together so that we trade amongst ourselves; people exchange their grievances and joy, trade their wealth to obtain the richness of other people. Usually people are grouped together with a common objective and if we could meticulously identify the goals and needs of the people as a group, we would gain a better understanding of the people within that group as well. Let's take an example of teenagers in current era, where they form small circles for various purposes, some may be interested in dancing and form dance groups, some may be attracted to sports and might form soccer clubs and so on. Clubs, circles, and gatherings are formed by those people who are likeminded and upon carefully analyzing the nature of the group, we can more or less define the nature of the people witin that group as well. Therefore, through an identificaiton of social groups, we can define the nature of the participating people as well.

Furthermore, social groups can somtimes be formed out of necessity as well; which shows how people react to circumstances or unforeseen situations. The miniscule elements of human nature are often revealed during unexpected events. For example, during the revolution for freedom led by Gandhi in India, people united together and their augmented voices were eventually heard and were able to gain freedom for their country and nation. However, the unity and the groupism among the people was fueled by the current situation of their society which compelled them to join their hands against a common enemy. This showed the patriotism, and devotion of the entire indian population at that time who sacrificed their life for the country. The social groups formed in such a way clearly define the people based on their circumstances and how they participated in the social groups.

FInally, social groups are also governed by certain rules and tacit understanding amongst the people. If the people do not have a chemistry with each other, it is impossible for them to coexist in the same group. For example, if an individual like to talk a lot while others do not like this nature of his, then, eventually he could be kicked out the group. In contrast to this, if an introverted individual tends to exist in a group with many extroverts, the introverted individual would have no choice other than leaving the group at some point or to be suppressed within the group. These nature of the groups, how they function, and the dynamics around the social objectives truely define the participants of any group.

In conclusion, a social group is composed of human beings, who possess immense emotions and contextual judgementing ability; this enables people to either co-exist or compete with each other within or with the goups. Therefore, by identifying the social groups, we can indeed define ourselves far more better.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...on once said, ' If we want to know the people around us, you have to know ourselves'. Its ...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...f the people within that group as well. Lets take an example of teenagers in current...
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Line 3, column 865, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...d gatherings are formed by those people who are likeminded and upon carefully analyzing...
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Line 7, column 586, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nature' or 'These natures'?
Suggestion: This nature; These natures
...t or to be suppressed within the group. These nature of the groups, how they function, and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3151.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 629.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00953895072 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00798087137 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67339711869 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456279809221 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4074138634 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.347826087 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225777750794 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748149010842 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032902000179 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141044018546 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306021064513 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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