Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Although, knowing about the past cannot guarantee success but reviewing about the events that had happened in the past really helps us to make important decisions. Thus, I strongly disagree with the above statement.
Firstly, it is believed that everyone learns from the past experiences and summon ideas to make great decision in future. It is human nature to learn from mistakes and generates ideas, principle from the past evidences to prevent doing mistake in future. For instance, there are three phases of life- past, present and future. The present form of life was the consequences of past and the future will be the repercussion of present. That is, Football player Ronaldo through his perseverance and determinant in football field in his early childhood has gained indomitable success.
Secondly, the technological advancement is the result of previewing the past innovation and making certain changes regarding the needs of today’s life. For example- particularly, human used mobile phone to communicate as well as messaging in the past or in the initial phase of development of mobile phone. After then, the scientist realize the device can be made more useful through adding more features like insertion of camera and to provide users to use internet through his handy device. Similarly, to meet the daily need, today’s scientist discovers mobile phone to include all the features of smart computer like high advance processors, screen touch and high storing capacity.
Thirdly, the innovation of today’s life is primarily derivative of past principles, ideas and theories. For instance, the propulsion of rocket is the derivative of newton’s third laws of motion. Similarly, the nuclear bombs are particularly based on the principle of conservation of energy as well as Einstein’s E=mc2. Similarly, the concept of specific relativity of Einstein helps to understand the concepts of physics in different gravitational space and helps to understand the velocities, gravity and defined other parameters of planets in reference to earth or other’s heavily spaced bodies in modern world.
However, there are certain fields where past experiences do not matter. For example, the prediction of today’s stock market growth does not depend upon the previous ideas and does not provide information to predict in future too. Similarly, the disaster management department is not able to predict the next natural calamities occurring on the particular areas by reviewing all the possible history of calamities. But, they are able to predict the consequences or negative impact on livelihood of human kind by analysis overall damage caused by calamities in the past.
In conclusion, knowing about the past helps to predict the future and people can make great advantage of the past histories to solve the problem of today’s world through the development of cutting edge technologies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... believed that everyone learns from the past experiences and summon ideas to make great decision...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and summon ideas to make great decision in future. It is human nature to learn from mista...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...past evidences to prevent doing mistake in future. For instance, there are three phases o...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heavily spaced bodies in modern world. However, there are certain fields where ...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...However, there are certain fields where past experiences do not matter. For example, the predict...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42731277533 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87432696754 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2237267848 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.95 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162783145494 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497873039135 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525397514801 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100660464369 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723895498416 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.