Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Law and Order is shaped so as to ensure the proper functioning of the society. Thousands of staff is working behind to make a crime-free nation possible. Every crime has a law enacted for it and the penalty for the same. Stringent laws help in producing fear among the general public from doing any misdeed. Fear from punishment is what keeps people in check and there is no knowing what they may do if the rules were to be made flexible.
In some nations, the laws are so strict that it causes a sense of contempt in the people in that country. For instance, if a state were to give twenty year prison sentence to someone who stole bread from a shop, it is bound to cause resentment among the people. A state law should take into consideration the people it resides, the work they do and the background they come from. If a nation is very poor and its rich are just living for themselves, the poor may have no option but to steal food in order to survive. But a lax law system will not guarantee the safeguard of the poor because it can give rise to a dozen more crimes.
Moreover, the increased crime rates will not only instil fear in the hearts of its residents but to the people in the other countries. They may fear coming to a place after hearing that some of their fellow natives were mugged while travelling. If a nation’s economy is dependent on tourism and the laws in that place are not strict, the increase in crime rates will dampen the flow of tourists in the country which is not desirable. Safety comes first for anyone, anywhere, and the judicial system is responsible to ensure that.
Although, a stringent law system may seem like a prison to some, it is better than walking the streets with fear, or sleeping in fear of someone breaking and entering their house at night. People don’t like to be controlled, but if they are not confined within the scope of laws and rule, they are unstoppable and will do anything to get what they want. This fixation to get everything their heart desire, is what leads to crimes and they can only be reduced by producing fear of punishment in them which is only possible by tough, strict and unbreakable laws which have no space for loopholes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
Law and Order is shaped so as to ensure the proper functioning of the so...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t laws help in producing fear among the general public from doing any misdeed. Fear from punis...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if the rules were to be made flexible. In some nations, the laws are so strict ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sentence' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sentences'.
Suggestion: sentences
...a state were to give twenty year prison sentence to someone who stole bread from a shop,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can give rise to a dozen more crimes. Moreover, the increased crime rates will...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... system is responsible to ensure that. Although, a stringent law system may see...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49379652605 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42222772738 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501240694789 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1411254762 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103885508287 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352624293116 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03002650005 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663565409605 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145922832776 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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