Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is admitant that laws shuld be flexible enough to take account of various circumstnaces, times, and places, however, I partially agree with the argument because of a few exampler.
First, I believe circumstances might need some flexibility with strict laws, especially when people try to protect them selves from threaten. There are many dangerous crime among our society such as terror and rob. People ought not to brandish their violence to the other, however, when they are threaten by others they have rights to protect them selves from the threat and danger. It is not fair for them to be incriminated for the violent which was used for protection.
Second, laws should be even on any time. This is because, in same era, people live in the same time which inform them indiscriminately. In case of driving, drivers have to be inculpated with their contravention, how long they they flout the law or not. It is significant to keep policy strict when it comes to the law on road, since it’s violence could take lives from people.
Finally, many people belives that it is convincing that any place in a same country should be constrained under the same law. Nevertheless, I believe that different laws should be conducted in the different places. The United States of America should be a great example of it. It has too many states and too large for the government to rule them. Each states has different culture, population, landshape, climate and economic condition. Therefore, they have their own government that rule their statement better than the one which will have same law.
In summary, it is granted that laws should be flexible enought to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. I agree with the others but when it comes to time I strongly believe that laws should firm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
..., especially when people try to protect them selves from threaten. There are many dangerous...
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much dangerous crime', 'a good deal of dangerous crime'.
Suggestion: much dangerous crime; a good deal of dangerous crime
...ct them selves from threaten. There are many dangerous crime among our society such as terror and ro...
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...h as terror and rob. People ought not to brandish their violence to the other, ho...
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'threatened'.
...ce to the other, however, when they are threaten by others they have rights to protect t...
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
...n by others they have rights to protect them selves from the threat and danger. It is not f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
...ated with their contravention, how long they they flout the law or not. It is significant...
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
... large for the government to rule them. Each states has different culture, populatio...
Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...he government to rule them. Each states has different culture, population, landshap...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, as to, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76248527827 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1339300333 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252630421868 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875705870655 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883704479913 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177218929782 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091045104662 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.