Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

A rule made by authority to run system without problems is called law. The rules are important to manage everything for example mother make some rule in the house to mollify difficulty in daily routine work. The law should not be flexible enough while law should be rigid and can change only with a particular process. I am not agreeing with the statement by following reasoning.

The law is made to help the weaker group of the society. For example to help the weaker group government of India made right to education and made rule for free education for under privileged people. If the government don’t make such laws than the rich and powerful people of the society exploit them and take benefits of their situations. Because of stricken the rule of education in India children take education and getting them equipped with technology.

Furthermore, there is another example also strengthen my point which is cleanliness law in India. Everyone understands that we should use dustbins and we should not mess the public places but people were not follow it in daily life. So many times government requested to the public about cleanliness but the public take it easy. Last four years ago government made it compulsory law for everyone and decided fine as punishment for who disobey the rule. Due to rigid law today India became clean and beautiful country and people use litters as well as toilets and keep surrounding clean and tidy.

However, sometimes the people have to suffer a lot due to some laws such as law for migration under which sometimes husband faced difficulties to take their family member with them. But all the rules are important as it is important for safety and security of the country. If there is a law than there is change is also possible. For example with the changes in society the laws became not effective than government passed amendments with permission of all members of authority as well as higher authorities. So rules should be equal and rigid for all as well as with need it can be modify but rules or laws should not be flexible that people take benefits.

Finally, as we all follow religious rules similarly we follow country’s law and the laws should not be so flexible that anyone changes it so.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
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Suggestion: times'; time's
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
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Suggestion: whom
...yone and decided fine as punishment for who disobey the rule. Due to rigid law toda...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for safety and security of the country. If there is a law than there is change is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82474226804 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57156057606 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453608247423 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5890447882 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223145390706 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783475383885 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924410069533 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147251725716 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550040999836 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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