The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
The luxurious life leads to prevent people to become strong enough and makes them to lose the individuality. Luxury word makes to think about the lavishness and extravagance of all the facilities require to live a life, one can consider it contemporary life, but not always correct. The luxuries and conveniences comes in an individual's life with hard work and its success. The inhabitants of the individual must have worked hard to get all the facilities. They were strong enough to hold the patience and worked independently to get that overnight success.
I believe in hardwork ship that tends to success sooner or later. Dhirubhai Ambani, India's richest person, is one of the great example of my viewpoint, who started from scratch. He started his business from a very small shop with true determination and goal and worked hard to get all the success. After being the most richest person of the country, getting almost everything in life, he showed true spirit of life. Ambani's descendant also had everything from their ancestors but they didn't stop there. They burgeon the business at extent and keep their personalities and individualities strong enough. We can predict that they can ended up at the other way, losing the morals bought by the predecessors, but it can not be accepted universally.
The individuality and determination keeps a person on track and can be seen in Bill Gates life. The Microsoft was started in the garage of Gates' house and became billion dollar company in ephemeral. Bill was strong enough to take up all the challenges, seen many ups and downs which eventually made him strong enough to take further failures.
Failure always tries to break people and test the individuality but when a person overcome by this phase, he truly deserves success. Richard Branson is the other example on my list. He is one the richest person on the earth who also started from nothing. From his Virgin airlines failure to the audacious decision to sell out the most successful Music company Virgin records, back then, he has proved himself as a strong person with a great individuality.
It can be inferred that the luxuries and the facilities comes in one person's life after the all bleak nights, he has worked on that made him a strong and individual person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
...ravagance of all the facilities require to live a life, one can consider it contemporar...
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Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e luxuries and conveniences comes in an individuals life with hard work and its success. Th...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Indias the richest'.
Suggestion: Indias the richest
...cess sooner or later. Dhirubhai Ambani, Indias richest person, is one of the great example of ...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'richest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: richest
...to get all the success. After being the most richest person of the country, getting almost e...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the richest'.
Suggestion: most the richest
...to get all the success. After being the most richest person of the country, getting almost e...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...verything from their ancestors but they didnt stop there. They burgeon the business a...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'end'
Suggestion: end
...ng enough. We can predict that they can ended up at the other way, losing the morals ...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...in the garage of Gates house and became billion dollar company in ephemeral. Bill was s...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
...n be inferred that the luxuries and the facilities comes in one persons life after the all...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238095238095 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.161904761905 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0595238095238 0.0497285424764 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0619047619048 0.0444667217837 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0857142857143 0.12292977631 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0309523809524 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73655217709 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0047619047619 0.0016655270985 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.0249443105267 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119047619048 0.0148568991511 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2287.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 386.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92487046632 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349740932642 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235751295337 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152849740933 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0958549222798 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73655217709 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510362694301 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 55.6608081922 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4257598453 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.35 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.674092028746 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 42.8751295337 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.25210084034 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370605426931 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117563411386 0.123202303941 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0653471263434 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532158547345 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169876260753 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140776644717 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776689211203 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333442066437 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0857385232054 0.0692045440612 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239517537741 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562052429931 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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