Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
Mass media Internet has made the world more simple by giving unlimited information on whichever topic one wants to find. Some people who while surfing internet finds some other topic fascinating which leads to change in the interest of that person. But asserting that it causes everyone's attention span to get shorter is not true. It depends from person to person.
Some people love the work they do. They enjoy finding more about the topic they find interesting and so they use internet to Explore stuff which they like without getting distracted. They want to have a keen insight about their vocation and thus they surf internet to find as much information as they want. yes, they find other topics on internet while surfing through the topic they want but no, they don't get distracted. physics is a subject which is very vast and more you try to find the stuff more it becomes complicated and interesting. A physicist will never get distracted when he is searching for a information on any topic of physics and will want to find more on that topic.
yes, some people while exploring their interests may come across something which they find interesting and divert their attention towards that topic not only once but many times until they find what they really like and then stick to it. Now a days students after completing their Engineering work for finance or consultancy and find it more interesting because on the course on engineering they realize their interest lies withing management than technology. some people like a famous personality is sidharth malhotra, despite doing engineering from a well known college in India is now is Bollywood actor. There are many such famous personalities who have change their vocation due to their interest in some other field and this is due to the mass media and internet which influence such choices.
In the end, I would like to say that yes, mass media and internet has shorten the lifespan of some individuals but there are many people who love their due to any other external source. at the end it is people's choice to choose what they want to do. If they like what they do they won't get distracted but if they don't find their work interesting they will get fumble and find other stuff which interests them which is good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193779904306 0.240241500013 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.210526315789 0.157235817809 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837320574163 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0956937799043 0.0444667217837 215% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0980861244019 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0502392344498 0.0406280797675 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42699394962 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382775119617 0.030933414821 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765550239234 0.0997080785238 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.011961722488 0.0249443105267 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0358851674641 0.0148568991511 242% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2284.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 395.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78227848101 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26582278481 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207594936709 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141772151899 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0987341772152 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42699394962 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458227848101 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7350877134 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2352941176 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0894399364 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.352941176 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.9947877885 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.972789115646 1.64882698954 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345400797548 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150926204312 0.123202303941 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103008190392 0.077325440228 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516543806891 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105825046015 0.149214159877 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152068790452 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506815153046 0.0892212321368 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383510070358 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0824028198013 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261825356759 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029743786471 0.0653680567796 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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