Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add
In this modern age of technology and so many advances in various fields, it can be said that women are definitely on par with the men. I mostly disagree with the claim provided in the prompt. Technical inventions has made it possible for every indivual irrespective of the gender to do the work solely which might not have been possible in early times. Following are the reasons, for which I mostly do not support the claim.
First of all, there are a myraid number of achievements in varied field all around the globe in which women have made a name for themselves. Women are not at all behind men and are tantamount to the glories accorded with men. For instance, consider a profession where there is no lethargic work such as a software company. The physical differences as such between men and women are irrelevant to the company. Women can very well do the same amount of work efficiently. This kind of other profession which requires intelligence and not much physical activity can comprise of a majority of women as compared to men. Women are already making a great name for themselves by occupying the highest positions in the board of the company.
Secondly, there are other occupations where a bit of physical activity required and is really cumbersome. As such the first preference for the job is given to men because of their physical difference. But women with proper training and excersice can be made to work in the same field alongside men. Consider for example, the fighter jet pilots. The pilots experience a high g-force while flying at a ridiculously high speeds. As compared to the bodies of men, women have a feeble body. But there are a number of women pilots soaring to new heights in the fighter jets. This is made possible with the proper training and so even with weaker bodies in comparison, women can be eqaully suited to the same task.
As there are two sides to a coin, so does this claim. A profession such as the construction worker, there is a tremendous requirement for manpower with even more manual labour. Women even with comprehensive training may or may not be able to work for longer periods of time. There are some cases where women do work in construction sites, but their roles are of supervisor whcih does not require manual labour. Even if certain women are able to endure the manual labours in any other profession whatsoever, it cannot be made into a generalized statement.
As,the claim is of vacillating nature and in reality is a very complex issue to be speaken about. Opinions would differ from person to person and from profession to profession. As a result, there are no easy answer which would satiate everyone. Men and women are however considered as equal in every aspect keeping aside the issue of tasks which require a comparsion for the inherent physical differences between the two genders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: comprise; consist of
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...made into a generalized statement. As,the claim is of vacillating nature and in r...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'answers'?
...fession. As a result, there are no easy answer which would satiate everyone. Men and w...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438502607 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448484848485 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2770919193 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6785714286 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267162849373 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752003201375 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048476039088 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157995396214 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352798629065 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.