Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement avers an universal truth that men and women are different in their physical systems due to which there are certain tasks that are limited to both men and women to carry out. But does really the physical differences have limited them to carry out a task or the society. When will raise the query on childbirth but that is not a task it is just like any other process that every individual suffers it is just that women have been gifted with this extra load to carry out by the nature. But in this context the statement avers about tasks that we normally face in our day to day life, I don't think it is because of the physical differences that the task do not equally suits them. There are many instances and models in our society that has proved time and again that nothing is there that can prevent anyone to do if they have strong will.
Men are preferred in most of the factories and in field works because it is believed that they can handle and carry out burdensome and tiring jobs where lots of weight lifting and handling heavy machineries are involved. It is true that women do not have the strength and durability of their bones as equal as the men but given a chance they can match the footsteps of these men easily in day to day life. If they were born with the honour of giving birth to new lives which is the most painful process then working in factories and labor work won't harm her body much either. It is the society that demeans her capability and veils it under saying she is physically weak.
In today's world, women are present and are competing in every sport and athletic activities possible in which men have been stealing all the limelight forever. They have matched up in sports like cricket to weight lifting competitions. If given chance, these women can flip every impossible task into possiblity in no time. In science we have studied everything that we see around now has undergone veolution and massive changes because they were allowed to adapt according to the demand and will of nature and themselves or else till today the giraffe would have had short neck eating the low grown leaves rather than stretching and enjoying the high grown ones.
It is sardonic that the statement given by the author states the limitation for both men and women but how much do we see limitation or denial when a man proposes to do something rash or sponteniously? Accept the fact that they they don't undergo the pain of childbirth for which I'm sure they don't regret either, but other than that which task are they denied stating their physical weakness, none! Instead they are denied if they wish to go into fashion world or even cooking world which is by default been regarded as women territory, which is stark wrong. Cavin Klein, Georgia Armani, Manish Malhotra are few of the great fashion industry kings whereas Gordon Ramsay, Marko Pierre White are some of the best chefs in the world. It is not the physical differences that limit our completion of a atsk but it is the society that impedes in doing so.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ifferences that limit our completion of a atsk but it is the society that impedes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, whereas, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56386861314 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.262045886 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1059178162 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.117647059 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2352941176 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158441112353 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05040791851 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439811518973 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989632615498 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284007349899 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.