“Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.”
A lot of arguments have been raised on giving both genders equal opportunities. Some say that men are stronger than the women and should hence take up task requiring a huge amount of strength. Others argue that what a man can do, a woman can do even better, and hence both can handle task equally. The prompt suggests that we not belabour this point anymore as due to physical difference, each gender has its suitability. In my opinion, I agree with the point and argue that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks, for three reasons.
First, the physical structure of men does not constrain their ability to develop muscular physique as compared to the structure in women. The physical structure of the woman body does not permit strenuous muscular exercises. Hence, in instances where the task to be performed require much physical input, a woman would not able to perform. Often, women who are pregnant or anticipating pregnancy, are advised not to carry out any physical or muscular exercises. Since a man is not constrained by such limitations, he is in a vantage position to perform a heavy-duty task than the woman.
Furthermore, women due to their inherent nature are more emotional and tender-hearted than men. As a result, women are better positioned to take up tasks such as caregivers, nurses, midwives, and other position that requires emotion sentiments. Take, for example, mother Theresa who was best known for her benevolent characteristics was highly praised for being generosity and humane behaviour. The physical nature of the woman which triggers sentimental emotion, makes this largess act seamless easy for her. Men who are unmoved by emotions would not perform well if emotional tasks are given to them to handle.
Finally, today's business world requires a high degree of networking and social prowess for the successful completion of a project or a job. These skills which elude the women makes it difficult for them to handle key leadership position today. For example, looking at African countries, the ratio of female presidents to male presidents is very low. Women are relegated to lower positions where they perform a task that better suits them.
Of course, some might argue that men and women were created equally and that anyone who can adapt easily can perform any task as good as the other counterpart. However, is not even precisely why individual gender should create a niche for itself and be better suited for a specific task? With this, we are likely to have the task completed easily and with less time spent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for example, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97447795824 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64939190356 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54524361949 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7598177709 60.3974514979 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259313471289 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756145095943 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487949517278 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143436449873 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016988542974 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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