Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue of men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to physical differences is a contentious one. This type of belief existed in the patriarchal society which had widened the gap between men and women. However, in today's world, both the gender have an equal stand and both can do any type of work. In many parts of the world, the women are making their way to break the stereotype of them not being able to do a task because of their physical difference.
There are many women who are part of the army, navy and air force. In an earlier time, these jobs were considered only suited for men and women were not allowed to take part in such tasks which require high physical strength. However, in the current generation, many women aspire to serve the country by joining arm forces and possess equal strength as men. Furthermore, consider the work of construction, there are many women who are part of these tasks. Hence, there is no physical obstacle for the women to pursue the task they do.
Furthermore, women have outnumbered men in many fields like technology, art, theatre, politics, etc. They are an integral part of the decision making of the company or the country. For example, Indira Gandhi, served as the prime minister of India and became the first woman prime minister of country having a population of over a billion people and served the country to her greatest potential. She served at a time, when the woman were not encouraged to join politics and the cabinet were full of man. As it is considered the women are incapable of doing such task. However, she proved it wrong and many women were encouraged to take up roles in the political party and in the cabinet. Also, currently many women are serving the country at the best possible way. Consider the case of New Zealand, the only nation which performed best during the pandemic and it was under the leadership of the woman government. Women are considered more empathetic and hence they play a very vital role on this planet.
Moreover, in an unconventional career like photography or trekking, women are making significant roles. The women are finding their passion and their physical limitation is no more the obstacle to pursue their dreams. Ranging from becoming the first member of going to the space or building high-speed trains or laying down the train tracks. Women are able to see in every aspect of jobs. Considering the area of sports, women are outnumbering the men's record. There are women taking part in weightlifting, boxing and even wrestling which earlier about 70 years back were not considered sports for women. Women have fixed their importance in all the areas ranging for doctor, technology, space, art to distributing newspaper or working in farms.
In conclusion, there are differences between men and women, but it is not encouraged to differentiate both on the basis of their physical difference. The characteristic of being courageous and risk-taking have made the women surpass the impudent of the physical difference. In the present generation, men and women are equally suited for all the tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itics and the cabinet were full of man. As it is considered the women are incapabl...
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Message: Did you mean 'wrongs'?
Suggestion: wrongs
...doing such task. However, she proved it wrong and many women were encouraged to take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86303939962 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62050610123 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7176248439 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0357142857 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255582710874 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811098483143 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639392288633 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179817137525 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595777107808 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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