Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
t has been considered a gospel from the primal times that women are weaker than men. Whether it be because of the inherent physical differences or the patriarchal mind set. Women have always been considered physically weak to be able to do anything exacting.Even today there are people who bear this view in their minds. However, as the times have changed, women have become stronger than their antediluvian counterparts in many walks of life. They have proven themselves in different fields like science, mathematics, medicine, etc. In addition they have been grown physically and verbally stronger as they have been enrolling themselves in sports like wrestling as well as labour and military.
In earlier times, females were only considered to be housewives. Bearing and rearing children and doing the household chores and bed with their husbands. But today as we see they have empowered themselves with education and speak for their rights even fight when need be. This change has led them to new possibilities and gained them a status to be seen as equal to the men.
The best example of women being physically strong is that their performances in physically combatant games like wresling and boxing. Few examples of these women are Mary Kom and Geeta and Babbita Phogat from India. These women have changed the way, the world used to look at females especially in India where females are considered a mere amusement for men. Their victories and achievements in these sports have created a new born respect for all the women in the word.
Another example of women giving birth can be taken to justify how women are physically able to do anything they can. I don't think any men would be able to endure the pain that a woman does while giving birth.
With the aforementioned instances, one cannot deny that women and men are not equally suited for many tasks. I believe that if women will be trained, educated and physically edified, the strength they will possess both corporeal an mental will transcend the men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95014662757 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5901949403 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9317839672 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209587172737 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741222513121 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519711936866 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125751771477 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350916373743 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.