Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
men and women though being alike species have differences that if one acknowledges apprehensively, then one might come to know that their are some inherent physical differences which qualify the ability to perform certain tasks with the desired efficacy, and hence are not equally suited for many tasks.
The idea of equal rights came from the starting of the french revolution which motivated other women to come forward and ask for equal rights and later on as time passed by some either for political power or for their personel gain moulded the very basis of equal rights and led to feminism and changing of the ideology across the world about equal rights. The idea originally was to give basic rights like right to vote, right to enter temples and holy places where they were not allowed to enter and subsume them into decision making which affects their life and their country. it was never a idea that women should be compelled to indulge into activities which were supposed to be meant for men.
there are cases where many women have proved to be better in areas where it was supposed that men were better but these are some exceptions. we need to accept the fact that there are certainly some differences which makes men and women different physically as well as mentally. we need to accept that we are all in our own way "unique" and shall not be compared with each other and use what we have rather than demanding for what we don't have.
though the above statement is correct but it lacks certain points like the tasks earlier which were considered not capable for women to perform due to their physical inability, now can be overcomed through the revolutionary technology brought out. earlier women were not allowerd to drive car or fly planes but due women's dogged endurance and break-through technology now these tasks which were once a impossible dream for women are no longer implasible aspirations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50846866827 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6181113585 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.0 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30692262448 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127702295486 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082304922114 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190280576843 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080304507283 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.