Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Women have been considered inferior to men in a number of aspects since time immemorial. The condition now is finally improving. Although men are equal to women in matters of non physical tasks, they are not equally suited to perform every task due to their inherent physical differences.
Let us consider the case of sports. There are men's teams and women's teams for almost all sports. There have been examples of Australian and American national women's team losing by a huge margin while playing with regular college male teams of the same sport. Rarely do you find men playing against women. This is because people have intuitively realised that an average man is physically bigger, and hence stronger than an average woman, barring a few exceptional cases. So when it comes to sports like football, cricket and others where strength, speed, endurance are tested, men outdo women. This is mainly because of the inherent physical differences. Men develop a broader chest, and have a height higher than that of an average woman. Muscles develop more extensively in men than women because of the higher availability of testosterone. Men are more aggressive due to their hormones. This set of longer bones, abundance of muscles, high testosterone compared to that of women make men physically buff and tall.
This does not mean men are superior to women in any manner. Although there are a few tasks like mining, sports, construction where men fare better than women, there are a lot more reasons as to why some tasks are better suited to one gender rather than the other. For most of the usual tasks that men or women usually do in their daily lives, this set of physical differences do not really matter. There are sports like synchronized swimming which are played exclusively by women as it is more appropriate. There are sports like Chess where the gender does not matter at all as it is exclusively a war of the intellects. There are so many other daily life events where men are equal to women. A few examples could be creating art, literature, music, or public speaking, driving, cooking and so on.
Thus, one could say that men and women are not equally suited for a few tasks rather than many because of their inherent physical differences, but for most of the tasks, it does not really affect the performance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is exclusively a war of the intellects. There are so many other daily life events whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, really, so, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85175879397 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54720961273 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492462311558 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7582383494 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7727272727 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482456948819 0.243740707755 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140299123534 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151586668429 0.0758088955206 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377405849439 0.150359130593 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14369141423 0.0667264976115 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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