a nation should maintain a homogenous national curriculum for the study of the students untill they enter the college
I agree with the point that, a nation should maintain a homogenous national curriculum for the study of the students till they enter the college. Because, it is quite easy to evaluate the students on the same basis of information for the admission in college. Before college level, students are not enough mature and have not enough capability to study themselves own.
In the learning period, if the students have incongruous curriculum, they will be confused when they interact with other curriculum students. They can't share and discuss anything which they don't understand with other person. In Bangladesh, there are dissimilar curriculum gor english and bangla medium. For that reason, the students of the english medium can't get any help from the bangla medium students and they become detached from those bangla medium students. In addition, they have to learn separately from the same teacher. So, if a nation doesn't have similar curriculum it will become onerous for the teachers to teach them. In college time, they become adept for self-studying, so if they have different curriculum it doesn't matter at all.
The basic of any subject is almost alike. Before college level, students are being taught about the basic of any subject. If different students have different curriculum, they will be ambivalent by observing other students. As a result, they will not learn anything accurately. We all know that, a student start his education journey by learning ABCD, because that is the basic. As before college time is the rudimentary period of any student, so in a nation the students should be taught in the similar syllabus.
In closing to this, I think that every student of a nation should have same curriculum for studies until they get admitted in college. Because this time is very crucial to them.
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...ies until they get admitted in college. Because this time is very crucial to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05333333333 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58564412779 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473333333333 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9202353873 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463333748023 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14356463399 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15159039531 0.0758088955206 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316945416416 0.150359130593 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109948244988 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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