To understand the major characteristics of a society , one must study its major cities.
Human being makes a society when they live together, help each other and also share their feelings. A place without people can not be called a society. There are some essential characteristics of a society. Various cities have numerous characteristics and to live in that specific society one should study those characteristics. If a person act opposite to his living society, than he will become recluse or alone which will be onerous to him. Because of this reason, I corroborate with the topic that, to understand and comprehend the most characteristics of a society, he/she has to perceive its major cities.
In Bangladesh there are many cities and these cities have different culture or characteristics. Like, Dhaka and Rangpur are two disparate cities which have dissimilar language style, food style, cultures etc. myriad things. When a man is staying in Rangpur, he has to know the characteristics of the societies, otherwise it may be difficult for him to stay there. He has to aware of their characteristics and by this he can take some precaution. As far i know , rangpur is a small city than Dhaka, so there is no bus, they travel by rickshaw or auto and these transportation system have to be known. Residents of Rangpur make a society and one can easily acquire knowledge about this by studying the city.
Besides, Bangladesh and America are two different countries and their societies are not similar. To know the characteristics of the society, one can gain information of the important cities or towns. As what functions they most celebrate, what are famous and renowned food items etc. Rice is the staple food of Bangladesh and by this we can learn that the society of Bangladesh are fond of rice. Most important thing we have to evaluate that is what is ratio of muslim, hindu or christian in those cities. In addition to this, in the cities of America, most of them are christian, it is cogent that the societies are based on christian culture. For this reason, the characteristics can easily figure out by their cities.
In brief, I want concede that, though societies are unlike, people are adaptable, they can adjust in any society by learning the characteristics of them and the characteristics can inarticulate by learning the major societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, as to, in addition, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94502617801 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0304487732 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489528795812 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3039146607 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.45 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235235047596 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653335412129 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749522463836 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153385382437 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663119200074 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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