"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter
college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic
courses to offer."
Education as defined by john Dewney, is the process of facilitate learning and acquiring knowledge, skills,ideas,values and habit.
Learning through academic institution would highly fashionable this days causing an easier marriage between student and curriculum .Academic courses usually offer student to learn within a binding and mollify their anxiety about what would be best to learn.However, i concede that this proposition if implemented, would do more harm than good. Hence, all student should not edify within the same boundaries.
In the purpose of education, we should focus more on learning than bounding anyone within a syllabus or a set of theory which would help to ascertain the unknown and covert thing. Firstly, consider a student, is interested in leaning the basic theory of science and technology who want to eschew the extraneous aspect like psychology,language and religion, if we give an onus to him for learning thing which is out his business ,it will be less fruitful in this inspect. so everyone must meticulously give the opportunity to learn within his/her interest and disseminate knowledge throughout the region.
secondly,the syllabus of the learning also depend upon the region where anyone lives.For example, those who lead a pastoral life it would be easy and productive for them to learn agrarian theories which may not be included for rest of the area if it implemented considering the hole region.Moreover, let consider for indigenous people who has their own language,culture and norms.If we implemented a common leaning syllabus,mostly considering the urban and civilized world , it will then be a indignation for them and their norms will be stymied from proliferation.
Paradoxically,a common syllabus may helps to evaluate the educational aspect of hole nation under the same scale which will be easy to consider all the overall national growth and to take any test.
Therefore,implementing a common syllabus before the higher secondary education inevitably manacle student from their interest and preclude their creativity.so we should seek an alternative option to this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48475609756 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32210641256 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.381368497 60.3974514979 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.888888889 118.986275619 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4444444444 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 5.21951772744 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129832713169 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651260176822 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062955316582 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712914523026 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686685274845 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 14.1392134831 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 48.8420337079 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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