Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account to get success in a work that may find in group work or an individual endeavor. Personally, I believe that it is always beneficial to work as a team to be successful in a task. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, working in a group can help to be more creative as different types of ideas gather together. Generally, no two single individuals have the same kind of opinion or idea in a task. As a result, different types of ideas gather in group work. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About 5 years ago, in my college, we were given a task to make our campus more beautiful. Firstly, as an individual, I thought that only putting more cleaners on the campus can do this task, as there is huge dust on the campus which may undermine its beauty. However, when I joined a group to discuss and do a plan for this task, I was astonished by hearing a lot of ideas.One of the members said that we could use a colorful poster having some instruction written on it, another one posited that we could use flower pot in the empty place of the campus like a corridor.
Secondly, group work can help to take some risk which can increase the rate of success. In group work, many people come together, so won't heart much to take a risk as if any failure occurs only a single individual won't be blamed. As a result, taking a risk can undermine the chances of failure. To illustrate this, I can give an example of my friend's project. In a project of their company, they were given a task to increase the sale of the computer as they faced a lot of reductions in sell in the last couple of years. In the first place, my friend has an idea to change the outlook of the computer like upgrading the design of the CPU and monitor. But as a person he didn't want to take such a large risk as tech-related products are attracted by its features, not only it's designed.If this idea fails., he may lose his job also. Nevertheless, when he joined a group and stated his idea, other members also support this. As a result, the sale of their products increases a substantial amount by that year.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that working as a team is always beneficial. This is because of gathering new ideas and the possibility to take risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38600451467 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5918487784 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498871331828 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0816143276 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5238095238 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121001201355 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396815157956 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329417946055 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873868102462 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397883579167 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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