A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The memorandum states that the company should stop the investigation on the recalled pet food that was thought to cause illness in the pets. The conclusion is based on the research conducted on the food samples. but, the result from the research conducted is not strong and require more facts for their authenticity.
Firstly, it is stated that the company has researched on the pet food. Here, the authenticity of the company to do research is questionable. The research conducted in company may yield the different results, but the company for its benefits may have over thrown the results. The research shall be conducted or witnessed by some authorized agencies to prove its validity. Hence conclusion drawing on the research done by non authentic or own company may not be valid.
Further, it is mentioned that the chemicals found in the food samples are approved for use in the pet foods. The individual chemicals found in samples may be approved for use, but the combined agglomerated usage of all these chemicals may be harmful. it may also happen that the research is conducted in constrained conditions whose usage in normal conditions may be harmful. The pet food will be normally used after many days of preservation with packing. The research has to consider the preservation time with a type of packing in the sample testing. Thus to consider the research results, the company has to check the above details during the research.
In continuation, the research has to be done on all the type of pets. it may so happen, that the pet food may be harmful to one type of pet but may be valid to other type of pet. In statement it is mentioned that the pets that were fed with this food are found ill. The company has to check the common observation in all these pets and shall base their research on whether this type of pet food is harmful to specific type of food. The company has to test and prove the validity of pet food on all pets and provide a conclusion rather than drawing a conclusion on showing that the constitutes of pet food are approved ones for pet food.
With all these ideas the company conclusion to stop the investigation on recalled pet food based on the research conducted on the food samples is flawed and require much research for validity. The company may provide the data on the validity of pet food on different types of pet, the pet food as a complete pack is healthy for pets. The company also has to conduct research in different situations like considering preservation time, packing conditions etc. under an authorized agency. With all the results from above stated conditions,the company has to take a decision on the pet food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: But
...research conducted on the food samples. but, the result from the research conducted...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...horized agencies to prove its validity. Hence conclusion drawing on the research done...
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Suggestion: It
... of all these chemicals may be harmful. it may also happen that the research is co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e harmful. The pet food will be normally used after many days of preservation wit...
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Suggestion: Thus,
... type of packing in the sample testing. Thus to consider the research results, the c...
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Suggestion: It
...has to be done on all the type of pets. it may so happen, that the pet food may be...
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Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...rawing a conclusion on showing that the constitutes of pet food are approved ones for pet food...
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Suggestion: Under
...servation time, packing conditions etc. under an authorized agency. With all the resu...
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Suggestion: , the
...the results from above stated conditions,the company has to take a decision on the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80042918455 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68651444633 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.3669527897 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7159183032 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2083333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470635745977 0.243740707755 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203667128777 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191620301334 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360913380122 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101059419213 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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