a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college
Every nation should have a single curriculum for all the students until they enter collge.This is neccesary as there would be no partiality between students of the curriculum followed by different educational institutions.
Firstly,The issue is truly acceptable and that there should be no biased between any student to another when they enter the college.For example a student who is from a middle class family studies in a normal school where there is no course for computer would enter a same college where a student who studies in a private top most school who has every knowledge of computer.When these two study in the same college the first student gets very low marks and was humiliated by other students as he had no computer knowledge he couldn't take that and attempted a suicide.Such cases happen everywhere around the world so to outcome this there is one national curriculum for the entire nation of students to be implemented.
Secondly,Adopting this can help many students to decide in which field they would be more strong when they enter college for example if a student get basic information on the subjects which are required in the college level they could gain more knowledge and have an interest to pursue that subject.Basics are important for example without learning the alphabets the child never learn words or read any sentence in the same way atleast the basics subjects which would students when they enter college have to be present in the curriculum.
Thirdly,There might be a chance that some private institutions might not accept this as they would raise a point if the same curriculum is followed then people might not enter into their institution so make them understand the curriculum would be same but they can use different type of teaching and demonstrating it to the students in a better way so that students willingly would join their institution.
In the conclusion,The issue is totally agreeable and that adapting the change would benefit the students shaping their future for a better person with informative knowledge when they enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10724637681 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84910875713 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498550724638 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 23.0359550562 300% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.244052406 60.3974514979 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.4 118.986275619 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 23.4991977007 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 5.21951772744 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388797047683 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219742368316 0.0831039109588 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981357904859 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219742368316 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981357904859 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 14.1392134831 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 48.8420337079 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 11.2143820225 264% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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