All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary
According to the issue it states about companies hiring outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more
efficiently.Instead they would have utilized their own employees then such consultants were not really required.
Firstly the statement given is partially agreeable because there might be many reasons why they wish to hire new consultants maybe their own
employees are not potential enough to help them more efficiently for example there is a company which has all the employees who have no idea
to deal with computers current generation everything depends on machine learning so it would cost them more to make them learn about the
computer instead they would hire employees who have the potential to work with that knowledge.
Secondly the operation of a company depends on the potential of the employees there might be a chance where if they take suggestions from
their own employees they approve one employee's idea and follows it then other employees would feel that there was a partiality between them
so they considered the other employee's idea and in the same way every employee would feel offended if there ideas or ways were not
accepted.For example there was a political party where one of the member raised his idea and the leader approved the idea which could
benefit everyone the other day there was one more member who raised one such idea but it wasn't accepted.So he thinks there is no much
importance for him when compared to others.He kind of feels inferiority complex and this leads to a huge impact among the party.
Thirdly it is always a better idea to hire outside consultant so they get some detailed information about outside of the company and how the
business runs in the market what need to be adapted to change their business efficiently.
In the conclusion the above issue is acceptable as it will be always a better learning when you learn from outside and hire new people than
to learn what is just inside and improve more efficiently
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Efficiently
... ways for the company to operate more efficiently.Instead they would have utilized their ...
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Suggestion: Instead
...e company to operate more efficiently.Instead they would have utilized their own empl...
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Suggestion: Instead,
...e company to operate more efficiently.Instead they would have utilized their own empl...
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Suggestion: Computer
...hem more to make them learn about the computer instead they would hire employees who h...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...een them so they considered the other employees idea and in the same way every employee...
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Suggestion: Accepted
...ended if there ideas or ways were not accepted.For example there was a political party...
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Suggestion: For
...there ideas or ways were not accepted.For example there was a political party whe...
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Suggestion: Benefit
... leader approved the idea which could benefit everyone the other day there was one mo...
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Suggestion: wasn't
... member who raised one such idea but it wasnt accepted.So he thinks there is no much ...
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Suggestion: So
...sed one such idea but it wasnt accepted.So he thinks there is no much importance...
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Suggestion: now
...it wasnt accepted.So he thinks there is no much importance for him when compared...
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Suggestion: Importance
...ccepted.So he thinks there is no much importance for him when compared to others.He kind...
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Suggestion: He
...ortance for him when compared to others.He kind of feels inferiority complex and t...
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Suggestion: Business
...ut outside of the company and how the business runs in the market what need to be adap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00887573964 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62598590395 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 23.0359550562 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.172173747 60.3974514979 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.6 118.986275619 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 23.4991977007 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.8 5.21951772744 456% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320035084754 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223173091543 0.0831039109588 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156988155424 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115952207501 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112543692726 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 14.1392134831 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 48.8420337079 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.1743820225 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.2143820225 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.