"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
This topic raises a controversial issue whether nation should require all of it students to study same national curriculum untill they enter college or provide different course as per state wise and school wise. Indisputably, A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum because students are learn all central level subjects and easy to compare result with different students from different state. Nevertheless, there are many problem if nation apply national curriculum like some students are face language problem and its management is tough. Generally, I agree that the nation should require national curriculum courses until students are enter in college.
First of all, I would like to point out that the example of India, where government make a central level courses that apply in many schools of Indian states, so all students learn equally hard and easy subjects. Also its exam system are good because all students give a same exam papers as per national curriculum. Also there is many schools that's teach state board education, but it is totally different as national curriculum, and student not easily compete with any other students from different state. Also the main advantage of national curriculum is that the all students learn same course, If education board like to change some topic in future than easily apply on national curriculum courses rather than different autonomus board.
Second, The main advantage of national curriculum is that the collages does not require release diffrent merit list as per different courses. We can see that the in many universities make a different merit list as per curriculum. If nation should apply central curriculum than universities easily judge each and every student ability. Also some universities provide beggining fundamental courses for those students who were come to low education system, so using national curriculum system all students learns same courses so, all students have a equal knowledge about particular topic.
Furthermore, There are many situations where national curriculum not easily apply because different state wise students have a different capacity to gain knowledge. If nation apply same national curriculum than those students who are weak in particular subject and these subjects are tough in national curriculum than they are face struggling more. On other hand those students who are already samarts and talented those students learn like easy national curriculum than they are easily gain more marks. The another disadvantage is language problem. For example, in India there are many different languages are use for learn, so if the government apply national curriculum than these curriculum also launch in different languages so, student easily understand rather than one specific language.
In conclusion, The author assertion is still hold. But many areas where national curriculum not easily apply because there are many schools where students not smart as compare to other schools. But there are lot of advantage if nation apply same curriculum in all schools. If the author's extend this topic and broadly define is merit and dismerit than it is more plausible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...ational curriculum because students are learn all central level subjects and easy to ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...ent state. Nevertheless, there are many problem if nation apply national curriculum lik...
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...l curriculum courses until students are enter in college. First of all, I would li...
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..., where government make a central level courses that apply in many schools of Indian st...
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Suggestion: Also,
...s learn equally hard and easy subjects. Also its exam system are good because all st...
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Suggestion: Also,
...exam papers as per national curriculum. Also there is many schools thats teach state...
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Suggestion: there are many schools
...papers as per national curriculum. Also there is many schools thats teach state board education, but ...
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... curriculum. Also there is many schools thats teach state board education, but it is ...
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...ny other students from different state. Also the main advantage of national curricul...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ny other students from different state. Also the main advantage of national curricul...
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...y judge each and every student ability. Also some universities provide beggining fun...
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...marts and talented those students learn like easy national curriculum than they are ...
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...ational curriculum than they are easily gain more marks. The another disadvantage is...
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...roblem. For example, in India there are many different languages are use for learn, so if the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this curriculum' or 'these curricula', 'these curriculums'?
Suggestion: this curriculum; these curricula; these curriculums
...vernment apply national curriculum than these curriculum also launch in different languages so, ...
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...nclusion, The author assertion is still hold. But many areas where national curricul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38446215139 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60805969362 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392430278884 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5020601392 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46573807843 0.243740707755 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188505752147 0.0831039109588 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120804914056 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32063042478 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121231627525 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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