A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position
This issue is all about whether there must be the implementation of the same national curriculum until they enter college. There has been a concern that is put up about the current scenario that the students are going through nowadays.
First of all, while digging deep for the variety of curriculums going on in our country, we could see different patterns in the form of CBSE, ICSE, State boards etc. Different study patterns could be observed in each one of these. However, there could be different perspectives towards this statement from varied set of individuals.
Secondly, when we try to seek the hot discussions among parents about these curriculums; there arises a totally divided point of view with a mix of Superiority and Inferiority complexes, perplexed within their minds in accordance with the respective study curriculum, their children are associated with. For example, about ICSE there has been the most renowned trait that the level of English is relatively higher with a manifold aftereffect of grading coefficient. Whereas for CBSE, it has been said that it is comparatively easier than ICSE. While talking about State boards and also tracking the historical view states that it has been the most challenging curriculum to follow till date. Moreover, when it comes to the checking pattern, the grading scheme has proved to be a real deal in terms of the score-gain.
On the other hand, if we observe the after effects of all these societal as well as the impacting factors on the students, there comes actually a dividend among their point of views towards the education system. According to their surroundings and the overlapping of the thought-strokes of their family members, relatives etc, a partial view gets developed within their minds and hence it becomes difficult for them to put up their 100 percent for their performance.
A huge level of scatteredness is observed among the individuals of our nation and this shall not be at all the mindset. This could have an ample amount of effect on the unity of our country as well and could serve as one of the obstacles in bringing together the people to stand as a unit.
To summarize, I support the above mentioned proposed solution that the students of our nation are required to follow the same study curriculum until they enter college. There would be nothing acting as a dividend among the mindset of the students and the development of their minds would be as per the requirement of the situation till this moment so that they would be pretty successful in making the appropriate decisions of their life and choosing the respective fields in which they want to continue, without the persistence of any bewilderedness in their mind.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, talking about, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98021978022 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78458502807 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0860561791 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.625 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4375 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.21951772744 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171422712803 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617299949468 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796006171519 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093586159942 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065980459172 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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