People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
The author of the statement has put forward the recommendation of not undertaking any risky actions unless they have not considered the respective corresponding consequences. I totally support the author. It is really important for especially the youth section of our society to seriously grasp this concept in their life. We may have many instances in daily life that could depict and justify this idea.
The most synchronous scenario that is reminiscent with the above stated liner is the Speedy Driving of People (majorly the Youth) that eventually modifies into Rash Driving and hence resulting into Dangerous accidents, that costs lives of innocents and so for the ones related to them. Despite of the fact that it is not an intention to end with such consequences but a human mind is intelligent enough to analyze any situation before stepping ahead with something that is entertaining them but at the same time, could have serious impact on other people’s lives.
Additionally, the lenient habit of drinking and driving is not yet given up yet. People think that they have consumed a small amount of alcoholic quantity but do not realize that it could lead to a completely different condition when put up critically on few constraints. For example, we can till date see the example of a Drink and Drive case of Bollywood actor- Salman Khan in the crime of killing a Giraffe. People should understand the severity of the things before proceeding for something that is risky. They must be logically thinking that the alcoholic consumption actually slows down our thinking ability and hence the decision making power.
Also, the suicide cases we can see, ranging right from the teenagers to the mature people as well. The suicide does not bring with it the extinction of the doer but it also brings a spacebar and a lot of questions in the life of those dear ones related with him or her. One should really think that the amount of time that their parents have invested into their brought up is really the thing that no one could ever commensurate. There is no problem that does not have any solution. Instead, the prolificness of that particular problem is there only due to the existence of its Solution. This encourages the fact that all the associated consequences with a particular risk/action must be considered in order to avoid mishappenings further.
To summarize, we could actually visualize the reflection of the justification of the statement from the author, with the help of the presented examples above. It is really necessary to have a clear picture of the results of the actions that you are going to proceed with up. Since the unconsidered risk could shape up into any haphazardous conclusion. This totally legitimizes the statement that, “People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.”
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... really the thing that no one could ever commensurate. There is no problem that d...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that you are going to proceed with up. Since the unconsidered risk could shape up in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, really, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04831932773 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88819858877 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531512605042 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 759.6 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8727614073 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21118670102 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586819217384 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702301704027 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119193525757 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664909136613 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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