"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
This argument is about decreasing the number of moped rentals to almost 50 percent of the current number. It is to recommend that doing so is going to control the accident scenario involving the mopeds and pedestrians.
While addressing to the proposed recommendation, we may speculate two sides of the coin. One favors the reduction of the number of rentals for mopeds, that could most likely control the ongoing scenario as per the strategic wave. On the other hand, we shall also not skip on the fact that mopeds serve as the most popular means of transportation on Balmer Island. So, definitely it would throw a major impact on the business of moped rental. Also, people in case of emergencies and disabilities to walk would be suffering in case of the urgent needs for moped in response to the threshold denial for it.
Turning the page for the reference case of the Balmer island’s neighboring island : Seaville; It’s town council had enforced a similar limits on the moped rentals and to the heaven’s surprise, it worked as well. One could possibly take the references from the past instances and also apply it but also see its effects post the mock implementation. It is not necessary that things would go in the same direction for the other place as well. There are various factors governing the geographical statistics of a region. So, things must be analysed before taking any decision, especially when it could affect the survival of the population residing there.
Also, we can see the given fact that Balmer Island’s population increases to about 100,000 in numerical terms during the summer months. When talking analytically, we may automatically arrive at a point wherein, walking becomes difficult during the summer season for any human being. So, it becomes as a harsh reality if people need to walk long distances just due to the denial of a facility due to limit-constraints.
Hence, I would definitely support the author’s recommendation to limit the rentals but the suggestion is to not just replicate the other history as it is, but to properly analyze the facts and figures of that particular geographic region and also imply a Mock-Scenario. And then deploy a further add-on solution that would mitigate the visible short comings of the Test-Phase.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not exactly
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not exactly
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1855 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.869 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.789 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.814 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.824 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'limit'?
Suggestion: limit
...s;s town council had enforced a similar limits on the moped rentals and to the heaven&...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...apos;s surprise, it worked as well. One could possibly take the references from the past insta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...erein, walking becomes difficult during the summer season for any human being. So, it becomes as ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 381.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04724409449 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96355543851 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553805774278 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5259884244 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.117647059 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270380174386 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766903963026 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987397632534 0.0701772020484 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138538662576 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587559617675 0.0628817314937 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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