A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
One of the most important parts of the new generation of the countries that have significant effect on the future of the society is education system of the country. Many people believe that the same national education system has more benefit for students because provide the universities to easily compare the educational condition of the applicants, however, in some cases, same national education system has more harm than benefits. I disagree with this point of view merely to the extent because of all or nothing impression it gives.
To begin with, there are many students who have to change their city and schools because of their parents' career. Therefore, in this particular cases, if the country does not have the same national education system it might have negative effects on the students with this type of circumstances. Because changing the hometown and friends might cause depression on the students and adopting to the new changes in the education system might make the situation more difficult and convoulted for them. Therefore, the same national education system provide the students the opportunity to easily adopt to the new situation.
Secondly, one of the significant merit of the same national education system is providing the opportunity for the universities admission comittee to fairly choose their perspective applicants.For instance, If the country does not have the same national education system, students have to apply for limited number of universities that accepted their educational system. Furthermore, even if the students university opptions donot limit because of the differences in national education system, the universities have to find a sophisticated system to convert the students GPA to one, therefore, it might cause some errors and mistakes. Therefore, with same national education system students have more opportunities to apply for the colleges and universities.
On the other hand, one of the greatest disadvantages of the same national education system is not considering various cultural and language on it. There are many cities in the countries which have their own specific language and culture and parents of students prefer governments of that countries consider these differences and teach them in their schools. For instance, approximately 60 percent of people in the United States speak in spanish and have their own specific culture, therefore, in the same national education system, students cannot learn about their own specific culture or language. However, in countries who donot have same national education system all these differences consider.
In sum, according to all above mentioned, it is crystal clear that the same national education system has more benefits than harm for students and contries and it must be addressed on case-by-case bases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46241457859 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88137339989 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407744874715 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2331436805 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.866666667 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2666666667 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198283818801 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099651200919 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531411691324 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141408948765 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144651418949 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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