A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
A country's future depends upon its youth and the education system they are under.education is the basic necessity of any person for his/her own betterment.education can be obtained through schools,colleges,universities or home schooling.Most preferred way to obtain education for small children is the school.Schools provide the necessary base of knowledge required by the child .
The given recommendation states that all students should study the same national curriculum until they enter college.The issue with this idea is the level of education that is needed by a certain individual.A student might not be intrested in science and technological subjects offered in the curriculum while some other student might not be intrested in social sciences.
Another problem this curriculum faces is that , not all students are smart enough to study a nationalised syllabus.A nation wide constant syllabus has to be designed in such a way that every student can obtain he required knowledge.But in case of a smart student,a generalised system might not help him reach the level he can.While , a student who is not good at studies might find it difficult to understand and study this curriculum.
Also,the nation should be aware of the available faculty ,that is qualified enough to teach the subjects.Certain states might not have enough number of qualified faculties.In this case ,the students of the state would struggle to recieve the education that he needs.
Even if this system is adopted by the nation , the process of conducting the exams would turn out to be a difficult task.The education system will have to devise a nation wide general examination pattern and has to assess each student on the basis of a specific exam scores.
In conclusion of the above,it can be said that the idea that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college , does not work on the basis of the above given situations and examples that are provided.It would be better that every state or school has its own education education system that caters to the residenst of that state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2231884058 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24196463489 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495652173913 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8537702076 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 300.333333333 118.986275619 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 23.4991977007 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222898373246 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125913888768 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718010027732 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125913888768 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718010027732 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 14.1392134831 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 48.8420337079 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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