A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation
and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In
developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape vour position.
If utopia was ever to be attained, centralization would play a pivotal role. The prompts recommends that all students should undergo the same curriculum prior to resuming college, a recommendation I strongly agree with. The following 3 paragraphs outline why I concur with said recommendation.
As I have stated earlier, centralization plays a key role in balancing various aspects of life and a centralization of a nation's curriculum i.e every school adhering to the same curriculum would make it easier for the education governing body of said nation ensure all schools don't fall below par. This will in turn ensure "quack" schools disintegrate and improve the education standard of all schools in said Nation. An increase in education standards would have a positive impact on the nation.
Secondly, enforcing all schools to utilize the same curriculums would create a balance in the student to school ratio. In countries where schools are permitted to have varying curriculums certain schools utilize this opportunity to imbibe certain courses that other schools don't offer to improve the number of applications they get per year. This results in a rather obvious disproportion in the student to school ratio of nations that permit such. An adoption of this recommendation can be advantageous to such nations which intend to ameliorate such a problem.
Furthermore, centralization of school curriculum of a nation would significally improve communication and coherence between teachers of multiple schools as well as the students. It is self-evident that cooperation brings about positive changes, thus, enforcing the stated reccomendation can have a positive impact on the educational sector of a nation.
It can be argued that decentralizing the curriculum would lead to an increase in competition and competition yields good results. This argument doesn't hold water as most nations presently utilize this strategy and their educational sectors are still inadequate as managing and ensuring strict adherence to standards becomes difficult. It is therefore essential that these nations scrap their current strategy and explore the option of centraliziation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, still, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60542168675 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26750869606 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6038775771 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.066666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201565869758 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076861548402 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617401796619 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119632683175 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400316000449 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.