Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness area in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for a economic gain.
it should be of prime importance to preserve and protect any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state. hence, nations should pass laws to ensure that these areas are not used for economic gain, and protect these areas in their natural state.
Let's first consider the importance of wilderness in human life. animals living in wilderness areas help in balancing the ecosystem and maintaining the cycle of food chain. moreover, the tress and other plants present in the wild provides us with oxygen, which is required for the survival of humans and other living things, and also absorbs carbon dioxide, thereby, helping in keeping the temperature of the earth cool. The animals present in their natural habitat are allowed to roam freely and can live their life with freedom in their natural habitat. therefore, developing these regions for economic gain would be selfish on the part of humans, and will affect the ecosystem of the earth in the long run. For example, tigers are magnificant creatures which mainly live in the wild hunting down animals, and by taking away their natural habitat, we are on the verge of the tiger population becoming extinct. moreover, the carcass which is left by the tigers after finishing their meal, acts as source of food supply for eagles or vultures. these scavangers play a vital role in the food chain, and the decreasing tiger population can have a concomitant effect on the population of the scavangers as well, and hence, we should ensure that the animals in the wild are not affected by our desire for economic gains.
Additionally, nations could always look out for other areas for expanding their economy, and should eliminate their choice of wilderness for performing economic development. Furthermore, human beings are the most greedy creatures on planet earth, always looking for opportunities to take advantage of nature for their own personal use. hence, if the government allows development of wilderness areas for economic gain, the companies performing this expansion will not give any thought to the negative effects of their expansion on the wild. moreover, these companies won't give back to the wildlife in any way, and will only take advantage of the wilderness for their personal economic gains.
Finally, it should be noted that the number of trees present in the wilderness are the main source of oxygen supply for human beings to survive. The ever expanding growth of the nation is now decreasing the population of trees present on the earth. The increased levels of global warming is evidence for this reduction in the number of trees and plants. hence, this can lead to long term effect on the lives of humans, and in fact, can lead to the extinction of human beings one day. therefore, nations should ensure that they do everything in their power to protect the wilderness in their natural state.
To sum it all up, it would be wise for nations to pass laws to preserve the existing wilderness areas in their natural state, and should find areas for economic development elsewhere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06679764244 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53422579137 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43025540275 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4261823328 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.95 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.45 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53480289919 0.243740707755 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180012218206 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169476583406 0.0758088955206 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.403727717892 0.150359130593 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200288373181 0.0667264976115 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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