Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Although it wouldn't harm corporations to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate, their main focus should be on making as much money as possible. The corporations have a moral obligation to make money for their shareholders and investors. hence, it would not be feasible for corporations to put their efforts and focus on promoting the well-being of societies or environment.
corporations are basically big companies which involve a lot of money and resources. This money belongs to the shareholders who have invested in the company in the hopes of improving their wealth. spending the hard-earned money of shareholders on promoting the well-being of societies would be morally wrong. Therefore, the corporations must ensure that the money and resources belong to the company should be used as efficiently as possible with the main foucs of making money. since, corporations pay huge amount of taxes to the government, they are indirectly fulfilling the role of promoting the social and economic well-being of the society and environment in which they operate. hence, the duty lies upon the government to ensure that these taxes paid by the corporations are being used effectively to operate many schemes to improve the standards of living of the society. since, the taxes paid ensure promoting the well-being of the society, the corporations have fulfilled their duties and need not spend any additional resources for social welfare.
Although, corporations need not do perform any additional duties to improve the well-being of the society, they should not, however, perform any activities which could put the environment or the society at risk. For example, let us consider the practices of large oil corporations. they are constantly criticized for engaging in oil spills in oceans and thereby, harming the environment. The oil spills contain toxic material which endangers the marine life and pollutes the water which might eventually be consumed by humans. let us take another example of factories operating near the monument of taj mahal, which is one of the Seven Wonders of the world, very famous for its architecture and history. The taj mahal is completely made of white marble which is very appealing visually and one of a kind structure across the globe. The various factories near taj mahal release harmful gases which has resulted in the white marble changing its colour and the smoke coming out also pollutes the environment. hence, corporations should ensure that even though it does not contribute to promote the well-being, it should never do anything which might result in negatively affecting the society or environment.
To summarize, we can conclude from the above examples that corporations need not devote any additional resources or money to promote the well-being of the society and prime importance must be given to making money. however, corporations can arrange a few events a year to boost public sentiment in their favor and also follow ethical business practices which can improve the lives of people and also making the world a better place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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...vironments in which they operate, their main focus should be on making as much money as po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8842544964 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3457387469 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291483192386 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101070887686 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774329449656 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199887041534 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558726136059 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.