Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Nature is an essential part of our day to day life, without natural vegetation, human can not imagine its existence on earth. Indisputably, in the race of becoming supreme power and the most successful country in the world, countries are continuously clearing the wilderness to develop economical buildings. Nevertheless, focussing on countries economies is one of the major tasks of lawmakers but they should also consider the harm that we are doing to the mother earth. Thus, I believe that lawmakers should enforce a law for protecting the remaining wilderness. As it will check the amount of CO2 and other harmful pollutants that we are constantly adding to the environment.
First of all, humans have already appropriated a lot of lands that belonged to wild animals which has led to the decline or extinction of many wildlife animals. Some animals and plants are quite sensitive and they are unable to adapt to a new environment. Humans by taking away their homes for their money-making buildings, leaving animals to move further deeper into the jungles. These animals in their new environment fight for their survival against the scarcity of natural food sources or competition from other animals. To illustrate, Sunder-bans in West Bengal, India used to be the home of thousands of white tigers and birds. But today the tiger numbers have reduced insignificantly and it has dropped to a level where they are now considered as endangered species. The main reason behind this decline is the human hunters and industries set up in nearby areas. Most humans fail to realize that one species extinction leads to an imbalance in the ecological cycle.
Moreover, the entire world is fighting against global warming. The main reason for global warming is the clearing of trees. There is less vegetation present today than it was some ten years back. If we continue to clear forests in this way then the end of humans is not far. As there will be no plants to provide us with oxygen. The water bodies might dry up in few areas whereas the melting of arctic circle ice may lead to floods in order area. Plants also play an important role in purifying the air and maintaining the earth’s temperature for human existence. In the absence of them, the earth will no longer remain a planet fit for human survival.
Admittedly, economical growth is a must for countries growth. This is especially when people are suffering from unemployment and economic depression. In addition to this, it also becomes necessary when the people of the country are begging for necessities like food and water but all this at the cost of the planet is not warranted. It is because of the natural environment around us that we can live, removing them leads to soil erosion which exaggerates the scarcity of food. Washing away of chemicals in the rivers makes water unfit for our drinking. Therefore we must protect them for our good.
In conclusion, economic growth is meaningless if we can not take care of the surroundings in and around us. Wildlife plays a crucial role in maintaining the food chain balance as well as the water cycle on earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... today than it was some ten years back. If we continue to clear forests in this wa...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... way then the end of humans is not far. As there will be no plants to provide us w...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t fit for human survival. Admittedly, economical growth is a must for countries growth. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ers makes water unfit for our drinking. Therefore we must protect them for our good. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2597.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73688269348 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8263269835 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5517241379 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.275862069 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167606512864 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411718742904 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392880039677 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840021171017 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341995097243 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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