Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Preserving the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state is one of the major responsibilities of every nation and hence for the sustainable preservation it is almost necessary to pass the laws related to it. In general, by wilderness area, what we mean is those areas whose natural growth is protected by legislation. Moreover, the recreational and industrial use of such areas is restricted. The necessity for the preservation of wilderness areas lies in the facts: to protect extinct flora and fauna, to minimize the over spreading of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere and finally for the development of eco-tourism.
Among various dimensions of wilderness area the most important is its biological aspect. For the conservation of wild lives and plants which are going to be extinct, the conservation of wilderness area is of the cardinal importance. In Nepal, the Government had passed the laws for the preservation of wilderness areas in the name of national parks. More than 20% of the land of the whole country has now protected the wilderness areas in which more than 300 different species of rare plants and more than 250 different wild lives are protected. According to the law, no people are allowed to hunt any species of animals within these national parks and also they are not allowed destroy the natural habitat by any means. These restrictions, however hinders the right of people to use natural resources frugally, have yielded in the increase of endangered species in significant way.
Global warming is the most serious and contemporary problem of the preset world. Continuous increase of temperature of earth has effect not only on the melting of snow of ice lands but its effect has been increasing, leading to more menacing problem of ozone layer depletion. One of the various greenhouse gases, carbon-dioxide has found to be absorbed by the plants while preparing of their food. It is then realized throughout the world that increasing the area swathed by forest, the dangerous effect of carbon release in the atmosphere could be effectively mitigated. If the longterm problem of ozone layer depletion is, somehow, diminished by preserving the wilderness areas then why a Government shouldn’t pass the laws for it?
Finally, the concept of eco-tourism deals about idea that connects a tourism to balanced ecosystem. As per the data provided ministry of tourism, about one fourth of the total tourists coming in Nepal from other different countries, mostly focus on visiting the national parks and the preserved areas. Some of them prefer enjoying the visit of forests to see different plants and animals while some others tend to learn about the geographical as well as the biological aspects of such areas. This observation explicitly suggests that wilderness areas may be the center for tourism. This ultimately leads the economic growth of the nation.
As concluding remark, the nation should make such laws which can protect the extinct wild lives, can attract large number of tourists and at a same time helps in the minimizing the problem of climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15643564356 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8832431173 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508910891089 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7278330059 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0476190476 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38993650338 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104988844682 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118749326205 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191169390368 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126656032936 0.0667264976115 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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