In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
While most popular arts known in the world, it is hard to guarantee that their merits are understandable by most people or they are worth for its understandable spirit. Apart from being understandable, the merits of arts obtain from the works’ everlasting spirit, which derives from its novel, deep meaning, and history.
Although the catchy and understandable art can be popular, its merits did not only live on it. It is very acceptable for most teenagers that popular art is very catchy and colorful so it gains many attentions so that seems very popular and worth to follow. For example, the songs of Taylor Swift are full of easy lyrics and rhythms always hit on the top board of the most popular artists. Undoubtedly, her work contributed to popular art’s development because of its lucid. However, except Taylor’s songs, a large number of songs only had been popular for a little while because of their easy understanding characteristics. Oppositely, those songs tried to be popular lost their merits while struggling to be understandable to most people. To contrast, many rock and metal bands have their loyal fans for their confusing meaning and complicated peculiarity.
Some of the arts living for its history, which inspire the living of human being in a peaceful contemporary. That art such as oil paintings created by Munch, from the middle era of Europe, one of most his famous work named “screaming”, reflects the deep fear and anxiety of people’s inner world generated in the society was rejected by many people in his era because the craziness the painting tried to express, but have many fans for its echo to mental problems in the modern world now. Therefore, even some arts were hardly accepted by a typical era, it might become famous and popular on a different period. The merits of those arts are being inspiring and complex, none of its desire to be famous because of its understandable back to the time when it was created.
Also, many arts in Metropolitan museum are world-famous statues, paints mix with classic and modern, are getting more understandable by the public thanks to the education development and many tour guides explain the deep meaning and the way to appreciate the work for free. However, many of the arts had never intended to be understood by the public for its goal of a portrait of elites, kings, and queens, or its religious purpose. Those arts are famous and always be famous by generation even though at the beginning, it is seldom to be known and very difficult to be understood.
Therefore, arts, not matter in what kind of forms, becoming popular for being appreciated by most of the people of its understandable are only a small part of them. In the kingdoms of arts, there are many styles and reasons for the arts to be created and be known by some people because of its merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d. However, except Taylor's songs, a large number of songs only had been popular for a littl...
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'some'.
...meaning and complicated peculiarity. Some of the arts living for its history, which insp...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, even so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91786447639 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90033199363 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464065708419 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1664658632 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.055555556 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0555555556 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335795941383 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127810099837 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510048158576 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215504928972 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447643123416 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.