IN ORDER TO HELP SMALL BUSINESSES THRIVE, GOVERNMENT SHOULD PLAY A MINIMAL ROLE IN PRIVATE BUSINESS MATTERS.
Success of a business depends upon the the rules and regulations under which it is structured, there are chances of business to thrive with minimal occults if the rules and regulations, and which are properly structured and maintained. The government places a major role in success of a business as the regulation is done by the government irrespective of government or private ownership of the industry. As the government rules are convoluted it requires proper implementation which can help thrive the business, but improper implementation could be hazardous to a business, so to initially set up a business at nascent level government should play a minimal role to which I partially agree because of the following reasons.
First of all, the business which is a nascent level needs a bit of a freedom to implement its rules and regulations to settle in and get results, if government rules are implemented straight away it would slowdown the business as it would not be able to meet the stringent regulations. So, the government should allow tax slabs and reforms depending upon the scale and income of a business, which would help to identify the scale of business and tax regulations to be categorized as per that. For instance, in a (MSME medium to small scale manufacturing entity) has to pay only 5% of tax from there total revenue compared to large scale industry which is categorized as an MNC which has to pay 24% of tax from there total revenue. This tax slabs would help small scale industries to thrive properly.
Secondly, when business is at nascent level the owners try to sell the product without any bills or entry of selling in black markets to save them selves from paying taxes which harms the government and the economy. Which the government should take care and lure the small scale industries to pay the taxes and eliminate the black marketing and illegal accumulation of black money by introducing tax return policy, for instance the GST tax return policy introduced by government of india under bjp government allows the small scale industries to thrive by exempting them to pay taxes or minimal amount of taxes by giving annual or quarterly tax return on there amount tax paid. For example a small scale plastic cap manufacturer pays 5% taxes per month on its monthly revenue would get his tax return every 3 months at an fixed rate only nominal amount of fixed fee would be deducted. Such regulations on small scale industries helps the small scale industry to thrive.
To conclude, as we saw certain examples above the government should maintain a distance from private industries in away that the rules and regulations are implemented and followed properly without causing any sort of hindrance to the small scale industry by forming certain policies which acts as catalyst in small scale industries which are at nascent level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96473029046 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77772861229 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429460580913 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.659141425 60.3974514979 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.416666667 118.986275619 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1666666667 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276485144969 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133981013928 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768261789067 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194116237043 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104499258316 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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