As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The dependency of human ability to think for themselves on technology is contentious one.There are numerous instances where some seemingly impossible tasks were solved using technology ,Therefore I believe technology does not degrade humans ability think rather it makes them efficient by serving them as tool in hand.
First, Technology has made humans life simple and easier in many different ways such as we use mobiles for communication, flights to travel to places in couple of hours that otherwise takes few days to months of journey and home automation technology that helps perform mundane tasks to perform in a single click of button.In All the above instances discussed a person saves his time ranging from hours to days , which I believe can be used to solve a number of different problems to be solved that still exists in society.Hence technology has given a really good amount of precious time to think on different issues.
Secondly, Technology creates new problems to solve. There are cases where an introduced technology created new problems or society requested changed in it’s performance which made people to think. for example when first computer was invented it can only perform certain mathematical operations more over it occupied space of moderate room , but with increasing demand from people it incorporated a number of new features in it and also it’s size drastically reduces and going further it was made to laptops which could be carried. In this human actively thinking, solving new problems or demand being faced.
In opposition, there are arguments that say human ability to think is getting degraded with use of technology, this is because there are certain people who uses technology for very simple tasks , for example some students might use calculators even for very simple arithmetic tasks making there ability to think and solve arithmetic problems less.But having said that I would not agree that problem is in technology but it is with the usage of it because if calculator has not been invented then how can one perform complex computation in limited time.
Thus in conclusion , technology is a tool that’s intentions where to make human better in performing things and to increase his ability to solve problems , but it really depends on person using technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.224 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76966526973 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.283874465 60.3974514979 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.875 118.986275619 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.875 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 5.21951772744 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238819058474 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105618999863 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512762432839 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138526014642 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417876428063 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 14.1392134831 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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