People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Often, the loss incurred by faling in an action is more than the gain by succeeding in it. Therefore, there is a strong case of not doing an action if the rsik outweights the benefits. The above recommendation also tries to focus on the same argument that if the risk of losing something is more than the achievements of success, then the task is not worth trying. I believe, the recommendation is applicable in most of the circumstances in real life.
There are multiple ocassions where there is simply no space for failure. Often times, we have seen people take risks that could possibly take their life just for the sake of mere adventure. I believe, this recommendation is very much applicable to the case of amateur adventurers who risk their lives for adventures they are not sure of accomplishing and the faliure of which will potentially take their life. in this case, the mere thrill of doing the adventure can never match the expense of faliure, which is their life. Hence, I see this recommendation beig applicable in the case of adventurers who are not entirely sure of their abilities but still risk their lives for the adventure.
Another case in which I see this recommendation being helpful is when people make risky investments. Although there are cases when people have had a windfall after an extremely risky investment, more of then than not, the uncertain investments can fail. Hence, if the possibility of sucess of the investment is not calculated well, risky investments cannot be made as it will lead to potentially doomed companies and even households.
Although the recommendation is generally true, I do know that there are certain times when risk is needed to be taken, despite the chance of a deadly faliure. I can relate it to a circumstance when I am playing table tennis. Often, if I am in a situation facing a match point, I pevent myself from going for a rsiky shot. However, I have realized that not going for those shots have ofthen lead me to lose an edge over the opponent in that rally and has cause me to lose the match. Instead, whenever I have taken the risk, backing my skills and abilities, I have succeded more regularly. This happens because I am more likely to hit the shot than miss it, becasue i spend so much time practicing the shots. Therefore, there are situations where not taking the risk can actually be counterproductive.
Therefore, even though I agree with the recommendation, I do not think it is absolute. Thus, instead of taking the recommendation as a dogma, one should consider the likelihood of an action succeeding, rather than just the consequences of sucess and faliure to decide whether or not to carry out the action. If this is done, a person is more likely to gather the fruit of sucess without losing much from the faliure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Often, the loss incurred by faling in an action is ...
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...on if the rsik outweights the benefits. The above recommendation also tries to f...
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...es, we have seen people take risks that could possibly take their life just for the sake of me...
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...which will potentially take their life. in this case, the mere thrill of doing the...
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Suggestion: I
...y to hit the shot than miss it, becasue i spend so much time practicing the shots...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...quences of sucess and faliure to decide whether or not to carry out the action. If this is don...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196296296296 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.183333333333 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0611111111111 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0814814814815 0.0497285424764 164% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0592592592593 0.0444667217837 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12037037037 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0406280797675 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87556299478 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203703703704 0.030933414821 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00185185185185 0.0016655270985 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.112962962963 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.0249443105267 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0240740740741 0.0148568991511 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2805.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 488.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74795081967 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290983606557 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196721311475 0.280924506359 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157786885246 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110655737705 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87556299478 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 219.290929204 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485655737705 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.0942821251 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1818181818 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3866603816 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.674092028746 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 41.8539493294 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.14857142857 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302417910787 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14381178397 0.123202303941 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0873022902755 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545636911337 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170187978415 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125262233893 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535975905307 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354943801955 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0599348531998 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214166467465 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236019450692 0.0653680567796 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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