People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
Discussion about the effectiveness and reality of an idea is a contentious one, which may sometimes lead to serious disagreement. However, for an idea to be able to work and gain the support it must go through thick lens of criticism and scrutiny . For a people, criticizing his own idea is one of the hardest jobs but in most of the cases the deepest criticism comes from the supporter of the very idea in order to make it more plausible and viable.
Criticizing one’s own idea is an audacious task as it means criticizing one’s own perception and understanding and accepting that one’s notion is prone to error. For this reason, some people stick to their own idea even if there is ample evidence that contradicts the idea.
For instance, when Galileo proposed heliocentric solar model, the church and its supporters slandered ,mocked and even sent the scientist to jail for his stand even though he provided enough scientific evidence. Bruno was burned to death for his opposition to the church. The Church didn’t want to lose its dominance over the society and its people . So, no matter what ,they were rock solid in their stand in the face of all attacks from science. It’s very hard for some people to let go off notions that had been hammered in their head deeply.
Now look at the other side of the same example. In the face of extreme opposition from church and other religious communities, these scientists kept doing their research,backed their hypothesis again and again with evidences. Because their success and reputation depends on the viability of the idea that they are proposing. In order for the ideas to be widely acceptable and widespread, there is no room for error. It should hold it’s ground in the face of any kind of attack from any side.
A politician refines his political views and agendas to gain support from people . For him,criticizing his own idea, redefining his thought process is a must to gain continuous support from supporters and to be in the race. Time , society , people thought is continuously changing. So , for an idea to hold water, it has no choice but to adapt.
To become and idea to pass the test of time and become universal it must be pristine and versatile.
An idea which doesn’t go through discerning is sure to fade away . People who wholeheartedly supports an idea always keep the idea under their magnifying glass.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, as to, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80243506009 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531707317073 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5460896345 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17793871721 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570156324824 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407092749054 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935196110484 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050979882098 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.