People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human beings are emotional beings. Behind, every decision that is taken in their day-to-day life, we cannot ignore the role played by emotions. The decisions can range over many subjects, be it personal, professional, business or family related, at every step we find ourselves in a labyrinth, and decide on where we are headed next.
I agree that, people who take decisions completely acting on their whims or emotions end up making poor choices, which might lead to substantial effects on the consequences of such decisions. Even though, they make attempts to justify their decisions on logical grounds, that would be a jaundiced reasoning, so that they wont look inane.
Every coin has two sides, hence the probability of you being right is half here, but in reality the situation is more complicated, there would be endless dynamics related to a decision. The decision taken with pristine emotion, would lead to unprecedented consequences causing you to regret your decision later. There are intricate factors attached to every decision. For instance, let us consider a very common situation in everyone's life, deciding on where to spend your honeymoon with your significant other?. Perhaps, you both had been dreaming for this your entire life and had visions of spending it in luxurious hotels in Paris. However, if you are being whimsical and continue with booking your flight tickets, without further thought, there is a potential chance of you ending up regretting the decision. This is because, you didn't consider the weather conditions right now, is it cold , is it sunny or is it raining. You haven't checked the availability of accommodation, and the possibility of you not spending your time in luxurious resorts, you have been dreaming of your entire life. May be, its not economically and financially not well-timed, as it is possible that the fares of flights, hotels etc are significantly lower next or the before week. If you had considered, you could have ended up a saving a fortune and funding another trip for your first year anniversary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... decide on where we are headed next. I agree that, people who take decisions ...
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...easoning, so that they wont look inane. Every coin has two sides, hence the pr...
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...weather conditions right now, is it cold , is it sunny or is it raining. You haven...
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Suggestion: haven't
...old , is it sunny or is it raining. You havent checked the availability of accommodati...
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...n dreaming of your entire life. May be, its not economically and financially not we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10619469027 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81379910404 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3144078142 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294414470897 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906512799347 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700992450249 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174389327295 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685646644402 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.