People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Humans are the most complicated species on earth. And the most intricate part of human body is the brain, which helps us take decisions in our life. From waking up in the morning to deciding where to invest, every single decision is made by the brain. Some are based on emotions and some are based on logic. The prompt states," People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers". I agree with the above statement, but not completely, because after all we are humans, we are not machines to think in 1's and 0's.
Firstly, It is advisable to take decisions logically in the first place. It is a common saying that, our emotions should not lead us. For example, there are a lot of suicides that occur due to mental stress and emotional breakdowns. This happens due to the decisions taken at that moment based on emotions. So it is clearly not the right way to take a decision. Our Emotions are vulnerable, and they tend to change often. But logic remains the same, it a reserve of knowledge and experiences that we have gather throughout our life. Using that logic to take a decision is the right thing to do.
Secondly, to justify the decisions taken based on emotions with logic later is one way of fooling oneself. It is natural for a human to take decisions based on our emotions, but once we realize that the decision we have taken the decision in the wrong way, we must correct ourselves rather than proving ourselves right. The real mistake we make is not the mistake itself, but the mistake of not correcting it after we realize. And such people never learn and remain the same. That is why such people are called poor decision makers.
In contrast, making decisions based on emotions is not completely wrong. For instance, when you decide to get married and wish to know whether the person you are dating is the right person, we tend to look through our emotions. In such cases, we cannot take decisions based on logic. In some humane actions, it is best to take decisions based on emotions rather than logic.
In conclusion, decisions are made based on both emotions and logic, and this depends on what situation the person is in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68702290076 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45572254111 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468193384224 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8029652371 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390072606186 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115989160049 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098158853541 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232925618099 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081289427974 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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