People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Emotions are one of the most important parts of a person. To every situation in our life, we have emotions attached to it. Every decision we take has a logic and a emotional part atatched to it. A decision which are taken solely under the influence of emotions wouldn't be wise.
I agree partially with the statement that the People who make decisions based on emotions and justify them with logic afterward are poor decision-makers but not completely. What we need to understand is to know in which situation would a logic or an emotional decision be wise to take.
Emotions shouldn't only be the soul factor guiding our decisions as decisions are very important factors and they lay the basis of what our life beholds. A soldier has so many emotions when he leaves his home yet to serve the motherland he has to overcome them otherwise under the influence of these emotions he wouldn't be able to achieve a greater cause and purpose that is to serve the motherland.
Another disadvantage of taking decisions solely on emotions is that this approach can be exploited by people to gain their own motives. In a democracy Sometimes leaders in politics take advantage of our process of taking decisions solely on the basis of emotions. What they do is that they target the topics which we are so emotionally attached to and grab major share of votes. People should also look at the logical aspect of what that leader wants to change and how he will change otherwise they might repent the decision they made while choosing him.
This doesn't mean that our life has to be governed only by logic not by the emotions. In situations involving a greater purpose or humanity, we have seen how these emotions have helped in laying an example to society. In a competitive race, the fellow participants sometimes go out of the competition to help other participants without caring for winning or loss. Here the emotional side of a person is what diminishes the competitiveness and humanity to help someone makes it more aesthetic.
So I would like to conclude by saying that though emotions are an integral part of our nature and it makes us who we are it shouldn't be the sole factor deciding our decision process we should add use our logical process and take a wise decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82798833819 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60596065741 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3233537431 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231631444766 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943600794057 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135816519074 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126043814747 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112304113519 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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