People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decisions are sometimes as easy as what to eat and what not to eat or as critical and life changing as what career to pursue. Some decisions are capable of have great impact on us, the people near us and consequently on our future. Decision making is a process that we tend to develop at a very early age in our life. And when our decisions are made based on our emotions, they become all the more important to us in our lives. People who make decisions based on emotions are the one who are capable of driving it to the end without getting deterred, but to justify those decisions later in time with logic makes them poor decision makers.
Decisions in life are not always easy to make, when both the pros and cons columns are equally weighed. Henceforth, puts one in such a situation where going either way has some benefits and equally deleterious outcomes.
Emotions are based on the bonds one develops with the people- family, friends, society, etc. And with each passing day one treads on this Earth the bond gets stronger, intensifying the emotions and making one more inclined to make important, life-changing decisions based on these emotions. Let’s consider the bond of love shared between the mother and her child. The mother may go against all odds to protect her child with a secured future. Most of the decisions made by the mother are based on the special bond she shares with her child.
So is the mother who acts emotionally for the good of her child, a poor decision maker? Answer to such a question is now contingent based on various other factors that surround the situation. The love for her child always drives the mother constantly and without being deterred on the path which favors her child, indeed making her decision firm and her a good decision maker in her own eyes. But, she may not be a great decision maker when viewed by someone else. Even when the mother may try to defend her emotionally taken decision by logic later, people may still consider her a poor decision maker.
The society, or people in the surrounding may at times, not understand the emotion bounded with the decision one makes in one's life. In order to come out as a strong individual in the eyes of others, people try to defend their emotionally made decisions with a strong logic. People may be fooled that the person is a poor decision maker, but not necessarily is the real situation.
Emotions are the strongest bond that binds humans together and make us co-exist in a society peacefully. Most of the times our decisions are not just our own decisions, which considers our self-interest at its peak, but it considers the interests of all the people who matter to us in our lives. People are free to judge emotionally made decisions as poor, but the special emotional bond makes those decisions the strongest and that person a great decision maker at least in one's own eyes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... bounded with the decision one makes in ones life. In order to come out as a strong ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.150268336315 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0840787119857 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0554561717352 0.0497285424764 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0626118067979 0.0444667217837 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.105545617174 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0447227191413 0.0406280797675 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46463180777 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286225402504 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00178890876565 0.0016655270985 107% => OK
Determiners: 0.107334525939 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107334525939 0.0249443105267 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0286225402504 0.0148568991511 193% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2901.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 511.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6771037182 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318982387476 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217221135029 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154598825832 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0939334637965 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46463180777 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430528375734 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.2020462854 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2173913043 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0900055956 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.130434783 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2173913043 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.9395048073 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.42 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467437157529 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131226874387 0.123202303941 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773063158928 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575389482009 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130274055404 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180395583116 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849672702671 0.0892212321368 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330041073157 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0945051819604 0.0692045440612 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292604999053 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633378457899 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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