People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

Decision making is not an easy task for everyone. In fact, I believe that there are no more than 10% of good decision makers in this ever expanding world. And the main reason behind such poor decision making is inclusion of unnecessary emotions during decision making process. But, saying all these, it doesn't necessarily mean that emotion always harm the decision making process. Now when it comes to justifying the decisions, If the logic behind that particular decision making process seems valid then to some extent, it can be correct but not always.
Decision making is not an easy task for everyone. In fact, I believe that there are no more than 10% of good decision makers in this ever expanding world. And the main reason behind such poor decision making is inclusion of unnecessary emotions during decision making process. But, saying all these, it doesn't necessarily mean that emotion always harm the decision making process. Now when it comes to justifying the decisions, If the logic behind that particular decision making process seems valid then to some extent, it can be correct but not always.

Some philosopher said that if we are able to eliminate our emotions during the major decision making process then we can improve out decision making skill a lot. Looking back at my own experiences when I had to make some decisions which would impact my life tremendously, my decisions turned out to be good whenever I took decisions without inclusion of any sort of emotions. Apart from these things, another thing I want to mention is that sometimes, we may need to add some emotions to our decision making process. For example, adding some emotions of fear to our decision might help us choose the right path.Also, some people take help of their gut feeling to make some important decision which most of the time keeps us away from making good decision.

So, what I basically mean is that, we need to make many decisions even before making our major decisions. Looking into the context of my senior, alumni of my college, desperately wanted to pursue his Ph. D.from the United States of America but the problem being that he is married already, he would be required to go to the US alone because due to some US Immigration Law, he was not permitted to take his wife to the US. Now he had a really tough decision to make, Either he had to supress his dream and live in his own native country with his wife whom he loved a lot or to go to the US to pursue his dream to complete his Ph. D. from the US. Due to his emotions, he ended up killing his dream.

So for the question: How does emotion hamper our decision making skill?, we can lean ourselves towards any ways because both the answers seem to be almost equally correct because emotions can either help us or ruin us while making decisions. It is just a matter of perspective and the situation in which we are required to make decision. Personally, what I feel is, If we are required to make decision in our professional life then we must remove emotions completely from decision making because even if we justify those with logic afterwards, its not best decision.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, really, so, then, while, another thing, apart from, for example, i feel, in fact, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 33.0505617978 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 553.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68896925859 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46570942415 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410488245931 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1218563366 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.863636364 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1363636364 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407236057728 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163774818738 0.0831039109588 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100327648203 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28594891856 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114625731526 0.0667264976115 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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