People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The topic suggests that people who make decision based on emotion and justify them with logic later are poor decision makers.I disagree with the stated claim as what might seem emotion to us might involve complex logic. Furthermore,the unsuccessful decision can not be judged under the same perspective as the poor decision and hence the people under the consideration should not be labelled as poor decision makers.
Decision makers who are assigned responsibility of taking decisions are usually people on high level of authority who have years of experience under their belt and they have made these kind of decisions at various points in their careers.What might seem emotion to us can be a thinking based on logic gained by years of experience and the outcomes of such decisions.Thus what looks like emotion to a tyro is complex logic which results from vast variety of previous such situations and their outcomes.
Furthermore, decisions are mostly made in a spur of moment and there is a very little chance that the decision makers have the time to explain the logic behind .This can have consequences such as delaying the action and probably failures due to delays.When the outcome of the decision is reached, the thinking behind taking such an action can be explained.
One question which requires discussion is What makes a decision maker a bad one.Is it lack of explanation of their actions? Certainly not.History is full of such examples where decision making is not just an art of considering logic and taking various factors into consideration.It also requires going beyond the logic and making a judgement call based on intuition and confidence in resources at hand.
Decisions can not always be successful and the decision maker has to bear the imputation of the world.Justifying the course of action after the failure should be taken as a sign of responsibility on the part of the maker and should not be misjudged as a sign of poor decision making.People who make decisions on the basis of their judgement and experience and are brave and courageous enough to take the responsibility of their actions should not be termed as poor decision makers rather they should be seen with reverence as they have the audacity to take responsibility on their action and its consequences, bad or good.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275252525253 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.171717171717 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0782828282828 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0479797979798 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378787878788 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0606060606061 0.0406280797675 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9288389975 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020202020202 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0959595959596 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328282828283 0.0249443105267 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0252525252525 0.0148568991511 170% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2334.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 384.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.078125 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346354166667 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247395833333 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197916666667 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114583333333 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9288389975 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 219.290929204 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6464990311 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 54.8571428571 23.380412469 235% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 167.220982962 59.4972553346 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.428571429 141.124799967 236% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8571428571 23.380412469 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.674092028746 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.5967261905 51.4728631049 155% => OK
Elegance: 1.8431372549 1.64882698954 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294108511566 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.188296029141 0.123202303941 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682574790078 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.849907815957 0.547984918172 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148688538375 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179658524715 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119257354006 0.0892212321368 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258238218422 0.385218514788 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0356644700417 0.0692045440612 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197025669608 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841285684454 0.0653680567796 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.