People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every day in our lives we have to take hundred of decisions. Whether we have to decide what to wear, what to eat, which movie to watch etc. Mostly
People who make decisions based on emotion are poor decision makers.
To begin with, the decisions which are taken under the influence of our emotions may seem to work perfectly for a short term but fails if we consider long term effects of that decision. For example, suppose one has to buy a new mobile. That person have a long range of phones to choose from. He can buy a latest phone with high end specifications(though he does not require that high end phone for his simple day to day task) for Rs 60000 or he can buy a basic phone which can meet his basic day to day needs. But in hoping to show off in front of friends he might choose a expensive phone rather than a phone is more viable. For now he thought it is a good idea, but soon he will regret it some financial crisis comes in the near future. Hence clearly, rash decisions under the influence of emotions impairs our judgement.
These decisions which are influenced by the emotions are not good for business environment. For example, in advertising world generally one have to hyperbole or embellish in other to make it more appealing to the public. For a scrupulous person this is unacceptable and may decide to show the public what the product is. Though, he is right in his place but this may cost the company a fortune.
In summary, it is not harmful to make dec
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Every day in our lives we have to take hundred of decisions. Whether we have to decide...
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...to eat, which movie to watch etc. Mostly People who make decisions based on emoti...
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...ne has to buy a new mobile. That person have a long range of phones to choose from. ...
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...ge of phones to choose from. He can buy a latest phone with high end specificatio...
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Suggestion: an
...off in front of friends he might choose a expensive phone rather than a phone is ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ancial crisis comes in the near future. Hence clearly, rash decisions under the influ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in summary', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201342281879 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.177852348993 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0838926174497 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402684563758 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671140939597 0.0444667217837 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114093959732 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0167785234899 0.0406280797675 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.49190424713 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0570469798658 0.030933414821 184% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00335570469799 0.0016655270985 201% => OK
Determiners: 0.0872483221477 0.0997080785238 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268456375839 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0268456375839 0.0148568991511 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1485.0 2732.02544248 54% => OK
No of words: 275.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.247272727273 0.366273622748 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.185454545455 0.280924506359 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12 0.200843997647 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.08 0.132149295362 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49190424713 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 53.6797127906 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3333333333 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1124423292 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 36.8787878788 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.16470588235 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30079394995 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103566129013 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710255959695 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522351405926 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.247305138433 0.149214159877 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118478031635 0.161403998019 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814541027145 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.172200798439 0.385218514788 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.150085049689 0.0692045440612 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199978928373 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106180662391 0.0653680567796 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.