People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position y

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People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Humans being's attitude towards himself/herself and towards other depends on immediate surrounding, rather than by whole society. We are social living organism but we do not have the ability to have deep interaction with the society.
We interact with numerous people daily- with our colleagues, neighbors, friends, spouse, but we have deep level of interaction only with few people. For example, a person might talk to his colleague mostly about work projects and often they are formal. On other hand, he might be more open to his friends and family members and it is expected that these people are more likely to shape his/her personality and attitude. In order to influence someone attitude, it requires exchange of ideas which takes place in informal environment like home or party with people close to circle of trust.
Secondly, we spend most of quality time with few people which includes spouse, parents, siblings. Anything taking place at home would certainly affect the attitude of the person. For example, a child brought up in broken home where his parents constantly fight, is likely to be socially aloof. Even though the society is prospering economically and is placed high in global happiness index. This can happen in countries like Norway, which are considered happiest nation to live as well as in developing country like India (placed lower in rank of happpiness index).
Thirdly, we live in a society in which each person is different from one another. Each one of them have differrent experience in life, which have altered their course in life. Inspite of living in same society we are surrounded by different personalities and different attitude. This is because each one of them had different immediate social environment. Some of them are optimistic, others are pessimistic. Some are confident, others are timid and diffident. One can remember this diversity in college or school, where one can find every personality in the same room.
However, in cases like war or famine, the attitude is determined by society as a whole rather than by immediate situations. People experience stress, depression and apathy which alters their personality for life. For example, younger generation of Syrian war survivors are unlikely to forget the suffering they experienced and it could make them socially stulted while interacting with foreigners or outside their community. In their experience, the people from other communities are responsible for loss of friends and might have issue trusting any other social group in future.
The fact that each of us have dfferent personality and possess different attitude towards others and ourselves is testament to the fact that attitude is depends on immediate situation and surroundings. Only in extreme situations, something that happens to society affect the person's personality, otherwise immediate people and environment plays an important role in person's psychology face.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: Human beings
Humans beings attitude towards himself/herself and to...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vironment like home or party with people close to circle of trust. Secondly, we ...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'considered the happiest'.
Suggestion: considered the happiest
...pen in countries like Norway, which are considered happiest nation to live as well as in developing...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e issue trusting any other social group in future. The fact that each of us have dfferen...
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Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...hing that happens to society affect the persons personality, otherwise immediate people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2471.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3025751073 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78337099928 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517167381974 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2803568188 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.958333333 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204531834967 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592702356203 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439406702523 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110757747651 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473923417196 0.0667264976115 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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