People's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A man is that social being who is sculpted out of heterogenous emotions and attitudes, most of which are derived from the surroundings and little of his own. It is indeed assertive to believe that people's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
Right from the inchoate stage of life, a person's actions and behavior are reined by the members in his family and his society. The educational years of one's life are centered in seasoning any person in both learned as well as in a humble way. There are many instances wherein the decisions and actions of people are correlated with those of the forces existing around.
People are indirectly responsible to nurture social beings who form a society for people to live in and live by. As an example, any successful person's lifestyle and mannerism can serve as a dose of inspiration to those around and any person's recklessness or experience of failures can serve as a ramification of errors for others.
Being under someone's influence truly brings out the best or worst out of oneself and promotes them to do better or to work upon the bad. Any form of response is based on the stimulus that mostly arises due to the external factors and lesser due to one's own internal considerations.
Though it is biased to say that the inner motives are lesser responsible for the growth of a person but is true that we tend to look up to someone than focussing on oneself.
Once the strings of limitations are broken then any person can rise to become an influence in the society. A veteran in any field and belonging to any domain is always considered as a reference to the ones who belong to the same field. Perseverance, determination, leadership and such analogous qualities are imbibed in any being because of the experience prevailing outside.
Thus, people's behavior is an amalgamation of virtues and characteristics built during the entire course of their lives which are adopted from the instances happening around in the environment and are made better by them in their due journey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d his society. The educational years of ones life are centered in seasoning any pers...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...in seasoning any person in both learned as well as in a humble way. There are many instanc...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a humble way" with adverb for "humble"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g any person in both learned as well as in a humble way. There are many instances wherein the d...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... live by. As an example, any successful persons lifestyle and mannerism can serve as a ...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... of inspiration to those around and any persons recklessness or experience of failures ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o someone than focussing on oneself. Once the strings of limitations are broken t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8418079096 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80375734548 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7572244747 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127851815764 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486591354811 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675707630353 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670385688895 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620413656631 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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