A person should never make an important decision alone
As the people have become more independent in current times; they have started to refrain from involving other people in important occasions and decisions of their life. The prompt suggests that a person should make an important decision all by themselves. I agree to the statement presented in the prompt, that a person should never make an important decision alone due to the following three reasons.
Firstly, the decision making ability of a person is highly influenced by their emotions. There is a saying- "never make an important decision when you are happy, sad or angry". This saying holds true, because a person is more likely to make bad decisions when they are not in a neutral emotional state. For instance, a survey conducted in early 2000's provides an interesting insight into this concept. This survey performed among over 100 people who belonged to different professions states that people who had encountered a bad event in the morning time, ended up having a bad day. This example illustrates how one incident that impacted the emotional state of a person at a much earlier time of the day lead them to make wrong decisions for the entire day, leading to a series of bad incidents as a result.
Further, if a person is making an important decision, then it is very likely that he is not the only one impacted by the consequences. Usually big decisions such as moving to a new country or city ends up impacting the people close to the person who is making the decision. For instance, if a person needs to relocate to a new place or shift their house, then their wife or children will be impacted as they will need to make similar changes along with the person. Hence, taking such huge decision entirely by oneself is not fair to those people who are also impacted by those decisions. The people close to the person who is required to make the decision, need to have a say in the decision.
Lastly, not everyone has the ability to make decisions themselves. This is indeed the case with so many people who do not have the confidence to make decision. This can be mainly because of few reasons such as less experience or insufficient knowledge. For instance, a student needs to choose a set of courses for masters but the student does not completely understand the pros and cons of studying those subjects. This is leading the student to ruminate over the decision for a long time leading to additional stress. The situation in this example can easily be resolved by taking help from the school alumnae or teachers. Therefore, stressing over making the decision alone is not always a good idea.
Some people may say that one should make their own decisions on their own, as no one is better judge of their own situations other than themselves. But isn't that exactly why people should involve their family members and close friends in their important decisions? Involving other people in major life decisions creates a group of well wishers and strong bonds between families; tackling a problem and finding the solution makes people come closer and understand each other's situation by putting themselves in their shoes. Involving near and dear ones in difficult situations helps to build a closely nested web of well wishers, as they start understanding your problems and connect with you emotionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... people come closer and understand each others situation by putting themselves in thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2763.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 570.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84736842105 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61791834488 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478947368421 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 869.4 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7785591912 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.52 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400984665687 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135550276484 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142161778691 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251851962167 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154338613308 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.