Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Nowadays it is evident that scandals are not only news on the television or on any other platform of social media, but shed light on the most delicate and intricate issues that usually don't come into light due to lack of exposure and inability of the public or the government to notice them. Due to many such exposures in the past few years, people are now aware of the injustice, the false claims and promises that are being placed in front of them.
Facebook which came out in 2008 as platform for interaction with people around the world remained as a pinnacle in the social media world for the past ten years until recently when a huge scandal was revealed which shocked the world. People all around the world used Facebook recklessly, providing it with the most delicate information including once's address, job, etc, under the impression that the data is secure as it was promised. But after the recent elections in The US, it was revealed that Facebook played a major role in manipulating the results by using the classified information. Due to this scandal, the government of The USA started assessing other tech giants such as Google, etc, so that a breach of classified information on a huge scale doesn't take place again. No one could have guessed what Facebook was up to, until the information got out. Such a scandal woke the rest of the industries in the technical platform and prevented them from doing any such breach of information in the future.
Corruption, bribery, etc, are the worst factors effecting a country's economy and development and India is considered one of the most corruptible countries in the world. The public knows what's happening around them, but due to the lack of proof nothing could be done until recently. In mid 2010's, a huge scandal involving the Chief Minister of Andhra Pradesh was exposed. Late minister, YSR was involved with disproportionate assets worth up to thousands of crores. It was never proved but at one point he was considered the richest man in India. This exposure led to involving many political leaders and other business magnets. The public never saw this coming and a huge rebellion took place, demanding the the tax capital usage. After this, many political leaders were exposed and the government collected thousands of crores, which were later used for developing the country as promised earlier.
In 2017, after BJP came into power in India, it took a major step which changed the country's economy for the days to come. It was well know that thousands of crores of rupees was being circulated illegally around the country and the government had to take a stand against this and so demonetization was introduced. Thousands of crores of rupees worth of money, which was being used illegally could no longer be used and this exposed several well known faces in the country trying to dissuade their assets from being exposed.
It is evident that many illegal and corruptible practices take place throughout the world and exposure of at least one of such scandal will make a huge difference in the society. Such scandals rarely come into light as the people behind them closely monitor every step, so that it is not visible to the public eye or any governing agency or representative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86690647482 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58481209342 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471223021583 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1729911906 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4761904762 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112463049599 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351830093944 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342046250152 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639860532353 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303620788359 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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